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13-Jan-2008 06:46:09

Aight, will do. - Ah, yes. Well done. I like that better than the others. It could still be better, but then it would be absolutely amazing and would be what I expect from published material. So it is good, now.

I can safely say that you will be getting a significantly better score in mechanics, if nothing else. Dunno about those until I finish the re-read.


And I've gotta go...

Remind me I'm on page 15, if I ask.

13-Jan-2008 07:00:27 - Last edited on 13-Jan-2008 07:03:25 by Chuk

Thanks.

I'm fairly sure every conventional error in my story has been tracked down and eliminated.

--Guard

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13-Jan-2008 07:04:26

Great story so far guard

(sorry if im pestering you lol)

13-Jan-2008 21:58:30

Not sure how you would be pestering me, but thanks.

--Guard

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