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Brilz
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Brilz

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Great, and I mean great story!
It is very original and the detail is so amazing that it leaves you just begging for more after each sentence.
It is dynamic, compelling, and mesmerizing.

This gets a 9/10

31-Dec-2007 05:16:48 - Last edited on 31-Dec-2007 05:25:02 by Brilz

Chuk

Chuk

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Guard, I have only been able to get on for about 20 minutes in the last two days combined.

I have forgotten any errors I didn't post. Since I've read this about three times already, I can't go back and find the others right now, sorry.

01-Jan-2008 01:55:25

7swordsman55

7swordsman55

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I just finished reading.. I know.. after like 4 days of having it on my profile I got around to doing it. :)

First off, I really like the plot. I just think that your chapters are too short. Not that I know about regulation sizes or anything.

Then again you may have me so into it that I just want to keep reading.

I'll rate this a 9.5/10. :D

Keep it up! Update me when you write more!

~`Rokey`*
-Spread the Word-

01-Jan-2008 22:36:50

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