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Yrolg

Yrolg

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Indeed, I was on vacation. I should hope to accept an application soon; if it's not within the next few days, it'll have to wait a long time, I think. I'll be incredibly busy during March. :D
If you wish to apply, keep your eyes open.

03-Feb-2010 02:20:28

Azigarath

Azigarath

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Username: Azigarath
Story Title: Cannibal's Lament
Quick Find Code: 49-50-905-59858658
Type of Story: Full length
Length: About 130 posts
May I post this review on your story's thread?: you may.
Literary Tools: 80/150
--Description: 30/40
--Voice: 20/25
--Symbolism: 20/25
--Depth: 10/20
--Analysis: 10/20
--Word Choice: 10/20
--Juxtaposition: 3/10

Structure: 50/120
--Format: 22/40
--Grammar: 26/30
--Usage: 11/20
--Sentence Configuration: 7/15
--Basics: 2/15
Plot: 80/100
--Development: 30/40
--Intricacy: 8/30
--Consistency: 7/15
--Originality: 0/15
Other: 50/90
--Impact: 11/20
--Flow: 16/20
--Conclusion: 6/15
--Theme: 12/15
--Empathetic Ties: 2/10
--Title Relevance: 8/10
Layout: 41/60
--Introduction: 11/30
--Overall Appearance: 6/20
--Title Page: 0/15
--Chapter Configuration: 3/15

Total: 137
Can't hurt to get a review I suppose. If I did anything wrong I'm sorry and just ignore this.

03-Feb-2010 02:31:04

I AM FRODO

I AM FRODO

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Ouch, bit harsh.
What I mean is, you didn't say applications were not open, the entire first page has not been updated since March. As you can see, he wouldn't have known about there being no application acceptance, until you rejected him.

06-Feb-2010 01:43:44 - Last edited on 06-Feb-2010 01:45:25 by I AM FRODO

Yrolg

Yrolg

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Thanks. :)
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The post directly before the one in question explicitly stated that applications would be opening soon, a very clear implication of which is that applications were not open. Further, nowhere on the first page does it state that applications are open. I would always encourage users to be sure that the rules are as they understand them prior to posting an application. My first page says that I will decline applications until I open the gates. The gates have not been opened.
I have stated the rules on the first page for a reason. It would be completely asinine for me to ignore the very rules I took the time to write.

06-Feb-2010 02:59:09 - Last edited on 06-Feb-2010 03:03:55 by Yrolg

I AM FRODO

I AM FRODO

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But you currently are not reviewing any stories, as it says in your rules, that is the only condition that you will not review a story (maybe not only, but only stated). You posted the grade of your most recent review, C0smic1's Price of Unification, at Jan. 24, 2010.
As towards you saying that the gates were not open, you neither said it was closed, so he probably acted seeing as if the gates were open (he probably thought positive over negative).

06-Feb-2010 04:02:55

Yrolg

Yrolg

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RichGodFrodo,
Hello. I would appreciate it if you stopped posting on this thread in an attempt to undermine my decisions and authority. Whilst your opinions are welcome, I will no longer extend this cordiality to your continuous lack of respect for my office, your inability to extrapolate from previous mistakes, and your innumerable attempts at disproving my sentiments. If you cannot post whilst maintaining an air suitable to what is expected, I encourage you to cease posting until such an act is feasible.
For a time not to be remembered as the first, your pestilent bigotry and disrespect has made statements which are not entirely true. I would again direct you to the following quotes, which you should reaffirm your familiarity with prior to responding (which, if your current manner is maintained, should be in private if at all).
“Please read the entire thread before applying.”
“You are expected to read the entire thread before applying. Failure to do so will result in a declination of your application.”

“If you have questions concerning this rubric or the application above, please either post them or ask them in private. I will try to answer them as soon as possible.”
I have attempted to resolve your disputes with a civil and respectful manner, but have not been likewise returned. With due consideration for the possibilities of what might have been and the expectations for what will become, I ask that you consider your thoughts before typing your reply.
I would also like to reaffirm the fact that you are not the crusading "bringer of justice" for applicants. If one feels as if he or she has been mistreated, the first page (that which you seem inclined to ignore) offers multifarious methods through which he or she may voice such discomfiture. It is not your responsibility nor right to take up these causes.
I ask that you be amenable, now, and take up my requests. If you feel this is harsh, please contact me in-game and not on this thread.

07-Feb-2010 00:50:53 - Last edited on 07-Feb-2010 01:00:55 by Yrolg

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