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1mf40

1mf40

Posts: 4,991 Adamant Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
Username: Hexer05
Story Title: A Change of Heart V1
Quick Find Code: hold on...
Type of Story: Short Story
Length: currently 20 posts
May I post this review on your story: yse

Literary Tools: 101/150
--Description: 30/40
--Voice: 20/25
--Symbolism: 10/25
--Depth: 16/20
--Analysis: 15/20
--Word Choice: 15/20
--Juxtaposition: 5/10 - not sure what that means O_o

Structure: 97/120
--Format: 35/40
--Grammar: 25/30
--Usage: 15/20
--Sentence Configuration: 10/15
--Basics: 12/15
Plot: 80/100
--Development: 35/40
--Intricacy: 20/30
--Consistency: 12/15
--Originality: 13/15
Other: 50/90 - would be higher if i were finished
--Impact: 10/20
--Flow: 17/20
--Conclusion: 0/15 - not done the story yet so i dont really know what to put here
--Theme: 10/15
--Empathetic Ties: 5/10
--Title Relevance: 8/10
Layout: 60/80
--Introduction: 26/30
--Overall Appearance: 16/20
--Title Page: 5/15
--Chapter Configuration: 13/15

Total: 137/520

27-Mar-2009 01:20:58

Parakarry267

Parakarry267

Posts: 9,830 Rune Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
Username: Parakarry267
Story Title: You Call Me Noob?
Quick Find Code: 49-50-276-55160253
Type of Story: Full story (unfinished)
Length: 56 posts
May I post this review on your story: Yes.
Literary Tools: 88/150
--Description: 20/40
--Voice: 18/25
--Symbolism: 12/25
--Depth: 13/20
--Analysis: 11/20
--Word Choice: 12/20
--Juxtaposition: 2/10

Structure: 84/120
--Format: 28/40
--Grammar: 20/30
--Usage: 14/20
--Sentence Configuration: 9/15
--Basics: 13/15
Plot: 60/100
--Development: 27/40
--Intricacy: 15/30
--Consistency: 10/15
--Originality: 8/15
Other: 58/90
--Impact: 13/20
--Flow: 13/20
--Conclusion: 9/15
--Theme: 8/15
--Empathetic Ties: 6/10
--Title Relevance: 9/10
Layout: 42/60
--Introduction: 10/30
--Overall Appearance: 15/20
--Title Page: 9/15
--Chapter Configuration: 8/15

Total: 137/520

27-Mar-2009 01:27:48

Yrolg

Yrolg

Posts: 25,296 Sapphire Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
Hello. Rule 12 of the Rules for Applying states that you must read the first posts of this thread. This includes up to post 20. Please do so before applying again.
Because this information was recently added, I will allow you to repost your applications immediately. =)
Please do not edit your applications.

27-Mar-2009 01:33:58

1mf40

1mf40

Posts: 4,991 Adamant Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
Hello.
Username: Hexer05
Story Title: A Change of Heart V1
Quick Find Code: 49-50-503-58456938
Type of Story: Short Story
Length: currently 20 posts
May I post this review on your story: yse

Literary Tools: 101/150
--Description: 30/40
--Voice: 20/25
--Symbolism: 10/25
--Depth: 16/20
--Analysis: 15/20
--Word Choice: 15/20
--Juxtaposition: 5/10 - not sure what that means

Structure: 97/120
--Format: 35/40
--Grammar: 25/30
--Usage: 15/20
--Sentence Configuration: 10/15
--Basics: 12/15
Plot: 80/100
--Development: 35/40
--Intricacy: 20/30
--Consistency: 12/15
--Originality: 13/15
Other: 50/90 - would be higher if i were finished
--Impact: 10/20
--Flow: 17/20
--Conclusion: 0/15 - not done the story yet so i dont really know what to put here
--Theme: 10/15
--Empathetic Ties: 5/10
--Title Relevance: 8/10
Layout: 60/80
--Introduction: 26/30
--Overall Appearance: 16/20
--Title Page: 5/15
--Chapter Configuration: 13/15

Total: 137/520

EDIT: I just edited the post adding the quick find code in... and this statement.

27-Mar-2009 01:44:19 - Last edited on 27-Mar-2009 01:45:35 by 1mf40

Yrolg

Yrolg

Posts: 25,296 Sapphire Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
Hello. I'm sorry, but your application has been denied. You are not allowed to edit your applications. This is to ensure that you think before you post.
You should wait two weeks before applying again.

27-Mar-2009 01:47:19 - Last edited on 27-Mar-2009 01:49:18 by Yrolg

WintryElf

WintryElf

Posts: 1,194 Mithril Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
Hello.

Username: Wintry Elf
Story Title: Traitor
Quick Find Code: 49-50-381-58482530
Type of Story: Short Story
Length: currently 10 posts
May I post this review on your story: Yes.

Literary Tools: 120/150
--Description: 27/40
--Voice: 20/25
--Symbolism: 17/25
--Depth: 17.5/20
--Analysis: 16/20
--Word Choice: 16/20
--Juxtaposition: 7/10

Structure: 110/120
--Format: 35/40
--Grammar: 29/30
--Usage: 18/20
--Sentence Configuration: 13/15
--Basics: 15/15
Plot: 61/100
--Development: 25/40
--Intricacy: 10/30
--Consistency: 11/15
--Originality: 15/15
Other: 76/90 -
--Impact: 19/20
--Flow: 16/20
--Conclusion: 9/15
--Theme: 15/15
--Empathetic Ties: 7/10
--Title Relevance: 10/10
Layout: 69/80
--Introduction: 27/30
--Overall Appearance: 18/20
--Title Page: 11/15
--Chapter Configuration: 13/15

Total: 137/520
I spring upon the unsuspecting wrong-application-posters!
--Elfie

27-Mar-2009 03:59:13

Yrolg

Yrolg

Posts: 25,296 Sapphire Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
Hexer05,
Hello. You are not allowed to edit your posts because it is important that you think before you type. This is an aspect of writing in general that will help you. The more that you practise it, the better and more efficient you will become. Eventually you will be able to write directly from your mind with all inspiration of your heart.
By demanding that you think of your application before posting it, I am reinforcing this theme. I am also preventing certain posters who would post an application and soon forget about it from doing so.
If you have further questions, please ask them. =)

28-Mar-2009 19:20:42

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