Hmm...
First off, your little interuptions were unecessary. They were just throwing the moral down people's throats. You should be good enough to make them realize what's happening without interupting their reading and telling them what's happening.
Sorry, but I doubt a story about Santa getting murdered with "blood raining from the sky" will really fly in a story contest about Christmas.
Just my opinion, maybe I'm wrong. But it seems that Jagex goes more for less-violent stories.
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16-Nov-2007 11:50:26
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Joppi J