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24-Aug-2008 03:30:49
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I added to it.
It's now 3 posts. Sowie if that's bad.
EDIT: Yrolg helped me with this, I need no more help. Thanks so much again, Yrolg!
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Prologue
Blizzards and Forgotten Lands
It was a cold night. In fact, it was a very cold night within the youthful forests of Tirannwn. Bluffs of the mighty mountains to the east were aloft with feathery snow of pure white. Crystals and ice lazily drifted down from the dark sky, atop the ancient forests that seemed to shine, the snow would repeatedly make a silent impact with the ground before melting and refreezing into the larger mass of powder beneath it.
The mighty and aged green coniferous trees, which stood higher then even a small avian could fly, were glowing with pleasure, as they subtly turned white with flurry. Alas, these mighty forests of ever-spring were now an ever-white. A white brighter then the brightest light of a single star, a white lighter then the palest or most glowing of crystals. A white, that is brighter then the silver waters of the Crystal Ocean of the west.
Isafdar, the largest and most well-liked forest in Tirannwn, was abuzz with a beatific joy. The Elves were about.
“Faena!”
The sound seemed to endlessly surge throughout the entire valley. Yes, a valley. This was a sparsely forested area within the south-eastern forests of Isafdar by Lleyta. Lleyta was a city of elves.
These elves have been come to known as the Saesti, or in the human tongue, “Wood Elves”. The Saesti have been in existence for hundreds of years, ever since the rebellion against the Sutinari, or “Light Elves”, to reclaim lost lands to the humans. The two factions have been in war ever since.
“Faena!”
The voice continued to surge again throughout the southern forests – this time even stronger then before.
It's now 3 posts. Sowie if that's bad.
EDIT: Yrolg helped me with this, I need no more help. Thanks so much again, Yrolg!
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Prologue
Blizzards and Forgotten Lands
It was a cold night. In fact, it was a very cold night within the youthful forests of Tirannwn. Bluffs of the mighty mountains to the east were aloft with feathery snow of pure white. Crystals and ice lazily drifted down from the dark sky, atop the ancient forests that seemed to shine, the snow would repeatedly make a silent impact with the ground before melting and refreezing into the larger mass of powder beneath it.
The mighty and aged green coniferous trees, which stood higher then even a small avian could fly, were glowing with pleasure, as they subtly turned white with flurry. Alas, these mighty forests of ever-spring were now an ever-white. A white brighter then the brightest light of a single star, a white lighter then the palest or most glowing of crystals. A white, that is brighter then the silver waters of the Crystal Ocean of the west.
Isafdar, the largest and most well-liked forest in Tirannwn, was abuzz with a beatific joy. The Elves were about.
“Faena!”
The sound seemed to endlessly surge throughout the entire valley. Yes, a valley. This was a sparsely forested area within the south-eastern forests of Isafdar by Lleyta. Lleyta was a city of elves.
These elves have been come to known as the Saesti, or in the human tongue, “Wood Elves”. The Saesti have been in existence for hundreds of years, ever since the rebellion against the Sutinari, or “Light Elves”, to reclaim lost lands to the humans. The two factions have been in war ever since.
“Faena!”
The voice continued to surge again throughout the southern forests – this time even stronger then before.
24-Aug-2008 04:39:51 - Last edited on 24-Aug-2008 05:28:40 by Iviker
Oh, well thanks Yrolg.
24-Aug-2008 04:45:30
Nice job, Piggy. I like it.
24-Aug-2008 22:11:33
I redid it, and *ow its ten times better.
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24-Aug-2008 23:29:46
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