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brjmrmine24

brjmrmine24

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I made a story tonight, it isn't quite finished, but I would just like people to look at it, and give me your opinions on the story so far, it is titled "The progression of a legend". It will have a good moral to the story, and I am making up as I go along. I'll have it completed within the next few days, so keep looking it up. It may just be my best piece of work yet.

03-Jan-2009 10:16:31

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[#FG08YMCQD]

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At the moment, I'm trying my hand at prose comedy. It's effectively a glorified noob story, but I'm doing my best to emphasize that the characters are stupid, while attempting not to use completely random unorientated humour. It's about an ancient legion of grand elemental wizards, of fire, water, air, and earth, dating back to many centuries ago. They are named The Four-fold Mages, and each element in their group is represented by a Legion, headed by a grand Elder. At the end of ten years, four new Elders are elected, nominated out of their current members, and then voted in.
The four candidates have to pass a simple test, to use each of their own magic to banish an extremely powerful elemental orb (like the one you can have in your house.) But the candidate for the Elder of the Water Legion fails, and is sent home, dejected, a failed wizard.
THEN, Paran, a failed mage, sees an advertisement for the open spot of the Elder of the Water Legion. Excited, he tries to join, and due to some mistake and misplacement of official papers, he is accepted as the Elder of the Water Legion. Only, he completely messes it up, and gets into lots of sticky situations.
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That's only a synopsis, I haven't given anything big away, so if anybody has any ideas to help further develop the story ...

13-Jan-2009 20:01:55

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[#24KSU0YHM]

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i'm pretty new to serious writing, like writing 50 page stories, so i need alot of help on characters, mixing up tragedy, romance, and horror.i'm in the middle of writing a story on Word, got in 14-19 pages already, but i need ALOT of help!!!!!!!!! i want to become as good as the best noob writers, like elitemage14, but with more serious stuff, and out of Runescape and stuff, even if it is midevil.
_-=+Everyone wants to kill me--But they have to find me first_-=+
_____All shall die--+=Under my eye..______
--You meet=** a killer=** It's me=**

25-Jan-2009 04:37:06 - Last edited on 25-Jan-2009 04:38:04 by [#24KSU0YHM]

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