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That's a really touching story. It's nice that you were able to take your pain and write about it, rather than store it away somewhere. You're a really good writer, so if you write more, please post on the forums for everyone, including me to read.

03-Apr-2012 03:37:53

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Calabon and Jag,
Thanks guys, your supports and words really do mean a lot :)
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03-Apr-2012 03:47:06

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Shen,
Thank you :) All of this support really does mean a lot. I was going to write more, another one or other stories depending on the reaction from people. Would you like a continuation of this story.. or a new one ;) I can always get writing <3

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04-Apr-2012 17:36:45

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Hm, you could have put the text within a few posts rather than stretching it out over a page, but who am I to get angry at? So there's a girl, sitting down, learns her love is a killer, and then she goes home and cries in corners.
Nice set of words throughout the page, though I was never a fan of short stories, but why should I get upset over that? All in all you know how to assemble emotion, though it's a nice start, as we all have a start for something. I look forward to your next piece of work.

05-Apr-2012 06:09:18

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Thanks :)

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05-Apr-2012 14:31:16

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Eliot,
Aww that was really sweet, thanks ever so much, I will be sure to add you in now!

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10-Apr-2012 07:39:12

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Very well written, I especially liked the description of the Jury:
"They prowled as though they were a pride of lions, seeking their prey, their fierce eyes piercing through the minds of all those in the audience, their robes swaying freely and constantly, mirroring the thoughts through my mind."
This bit shined out from the rest in my opinion, good potential. Excellent and imaginative, although I don't normally go for this lovey-dovey stuff :P
Look forward to your future pieces

11-Apr-2012 03:37:27

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Cyun,
Thank you for taking the time to read it and pick the part you felt was 'strongest' so to speak. I appreciate that greatly :) If you don't mind, I have added you as a supporter ;) New works will be arriving once I have finished my work for school :D

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11-Apr-2012 23:32:28

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