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07-Nov-2007 01:51:45

hey, happy 1 day early b-day. And mbt I thougth the story was a bit too fast also, but don't beat yourself up. And Prince Vern I think were all over 13 here. Plus I like Zamak and Sahra a couple a thing like that just happened to me at school. and shes really hot, - the kissing.

07-Nov-2007 04:30:24

Er Mbt, a quick note. Don't post on my newest thread...I know you're tired of this and so am I. I thought I had it planned out but it turns out I haven't. SO SORRY!

07-Nov-2007 06:36:05

sorry i might sound un patient so sorry if it does.
when does the next chapter come? just asking i know that
u have a real life too take care of too.
btw thanks for giving thread number too ur other story

07-Nov-2007 22:11:43 - Last edited on 07-Nov-2007 22:13:03 by Kolok565

oooh i didnt know that mega made up the name for this story but now i know btw this story is better than ur other but both are good!

07-Nov-2007 22:22:22

Literature Library & Magazine Review:

1/1 Grammar and/or Punctuation: 1/1
2/3 Spelling Errors: 1/3
3/3 "Quoting": 3/3
4/4 Verbal usage: 4/4
5/5 Sentence Combining: 5/5
Total: 14/15
Grade: A-
Chance of getting in Hall of Fame: 0.933333... = 93%
My Comment:
Excellent story, I really was at the edge of my seat in most of the fighting part's! I might put you in the Hall of Fame (5/5 Stories in the Hall of Fame) because you have a grand story, worthy of any adventurer that decides to read it!
I do not recommend it though, to young readers, for of the gory and bloody scenes, but I do recommend it for teens (12+).
*Literature Library & Magazine Review~

07-Nov-2007 22:55:32 - Last edited on 07-Nov-2007 23:00:07 by Rexraptor94

I don't remember applying for that, but thanks.
~ (V)߆§¢‡, Pain in the neck ~ Rater and Librarian of The Yanillian Library ~ Being called Mitch by the stories forum authors. ~

07-Nov-2007 22:58:46

07-Nov-2007 22:59:49

I see. I'd ask for permission if you're going to put it up, though, for some people wouldn't want that. That's just a piece of advice.
~ (V)߆§¢‡, Pain in the neck ~ Rater and Librarian of The Yanillian Library ~ Being called Mitch by the stories forum authors. ~

07-Nov-2007 23:04:10

07-Nov-2007 23:07:26