daw dan shulda died and u never brought in how jaldar got his powers it took me awhile to think up that stroy i know i gave him to you but if its alright can i write a story on jald*** origin on these forums?
wow i have so far read about then whole story and i love it keep up the good work u should consider writing books like these
u make better stories then i do
^_^but i like ur stories