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Venmi

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I’m in fear, the sweat sliding down my face as the swordsman is ready to shove the blade through my throat. ‘Help me father, please help me,’ I thought. ‘Please, I’m not ready to die yet. There’s so much evil I need to achieve.’

The swordsman snickered, with his boot shoved against my chest, preventing me from moving. His boot felt like a ton of bricks as he slowly pressed harder. “I guess it’s time for you to die,” he said as he quickly jabbed the sword, its target, my throat.

Suddenly, a brick of ice appeared over me when the swordsman jabbed. The blade rebounded against the ice so his arm was sticking straight up, with the blade symmetrical with the flagpole stuck vertically in the ground a few miles east. The swordsman then was frozen in a couple sheets of ice.

The ice above me disappeared, the swordsman boot off my chest so I was able to move again. I was still dazed, so I still could barely move. I heard a laughing howl. I turned my head and saw a man in the distance on top of a house, his blue eyes shining in the morning light.

He conjured some water and dropped it on me as he walked over. I was able to move after the refreshing water fell on my face. “Need a hand,” he said extending his hand. I graciously accepted the hand so I could rise.

“Thanks,” I said smiling. “If it weren’t for you, I’d be dead now. I’m Zamak, who are you?”

The man smiled. “The name’s Jaldar and I didn’t mind saving you. I mean, we both have the same motive, to be evil, is that right?” he said smiling.

I was shocked, but gave a smile to conceal it. “Yes, that’s very true.”

“Good,” Jaldar continued, “Let’s go wreck some more evil.”

We both smiled as we went into another house, to kill more Fremmeniks.

09-Jun-2007 19:01:33 - Last edited on 28-Jun-2007 14:33:50 by Venmi

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This next part which will be posted is a bit sick. If you have a quesy stomach, don't read this next part. Mods, if this is too gross and gory to be put on the forums, I will edit the post. Just hide it if it is neccesary. I will then redo the post and edit it so it's not as bad. Happy reading and if your a writer who's reading my story, happy writing.

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10-Jun-2007 05:22:31 - Last edited on 10-Jun-2007 05:22:54 by Venmi

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We barged into the doors of another house to see what kind of blood we can splatter. I snickered as I saw a woman roughly 16 sleeping. “Get some nice women blood splattered all over the walls huh,” I said.
“No,* Jaldar said.
“No?” I asked very confused. Smiling, Jaldar continued.
“We want more than her blood. Let’s take her heart out, and stick it to the end of that blade of yours.
The sound of that almost made me puke. Trying to keep myself cool, I just continued talking. “How do you suppose we do that?” I asked.
Jaldar snickered. “Listen fool, my water will rip the heart out of her throat, and then you stick it through the blade.”
“Very sick and sinister,” I agreed. “Let’s do it.”
Without warning, I picked her up, and smashed her face against the wall. She did*’t scream or anything, she just piped her mouth up. “Put me down, pig!” she snapped.
*Oh, beautiful, I don’t think we’re going to put you down,” Jaldar said. Jaldar was suddenly slapped and she broke free of my grip. “That’s it &^*@#, you’re going down,” Jaldar said cracking his neck.
Jaldar brought whip lashes of water to surround her. “Bring it on,” she sneered. The water whipped around her faster than a speeding arrow and brought her up so her feet were two feet away from the ground, the water choking her. Jaldar conjured another whip of water, and shoved it down her throat.
She gagged terribly. I had my arms crossed and was leaning against the window watching. In seconds, the heart was pulled out of the throat, the blood spilling everywhere as the heart made faint beats.
She screamed whatever scream she could muster. “Stick the blade through the heart now!* Jaldar demanded. I took out my blade and shoved it through the slowly beating heart. I stuck it against the wall and removed the blade as the blood splattered throughout the room.
“Hey!” voices from outside chanted. “Come out with your hands up now!*
Jaldar and I looked at each other. “This is not good!” we both exclaimed.

10-Jun-2007 05:24:35 - Last edited on 29-Apr-2009 18:33:58 by Venmi

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QUIZ: I'm having a short quiz. Here are the questions.

1. Who are the people outside the house that Jaldar and Zamak are now in?

2. Who is Sarah?

3. Why is Guthix always grumpy?

4. Put down any characters used (including subtle ones)

5. What was Zamak's name given to him in the Fremmenik Province?

10-Jun-2007 05:40:29 - Last edited on 10-Jun-2007 05:51:39 by Venmi

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This is good! But a bit disgusting...and putrid...and gross...and sickly...

1. Who are the people outside the house that Jaldar and Zamak are now in? Fremminiks?

2. Who is Sarah? Saradomin's daughter

3. Why is Guthix always grumpy? Because his brothers are constantly fighting each other and he is always sorting them out.

4. Put down any characters used (including subtle ones) I hate you for this...I really don't know.

5. What was Zamak's name given to him in the Fremmenik Province? Er...

10-Jun-2007 05:53:03 - Last edited on 10-Jun-2007 05:54:34 by [#B36CAR851]

Venmi

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Lol, you seem sickened, and mad that question 4 and 5 you can't answer lol. See, there's Jalda(c)r's sick side in that part of the chapter. Tada, there you go. I will put the answer to the quiz tomorrow when I've written more and more people have answered my quiz.

10-Jun-2007 06:25:58 - Last edited on 10-Jun-2007 06:27:09 by Venmi

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