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Venmi

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Bret, I don't think you get what a first person view story means. It means a character in the story is telling it. I'm not telling it like I am in my other story!
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04-Jun-2007 20:13:55

Venmi

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Guthix took the barrier off Zamorak, got rid of the smoke which stopped him from talking, and walked over to him. Zamorak tried to slice Guthix, but he dematerialized so Zamorak fell on his face just like Saradomin did.

“I thought you learned not to do that since you saw Saradomin try and failed miserably,” Guthix said putting the barrier back on Zamorak.

“That’s not funny,” Zamorak murmured with his hand covering his nose.

“Of course it's not!” Guthix exclaimed. “Nothing is funny when you always are woken up from an eternal sleep! I’m going to talk to your son, who understands my issue, and then I’m out of here. Before I leave, I’ll make sure I release you from the barrier.”

Guthix walked over to me and took off the barrier. He then created a bench which he sat on. “Sit,” he said to me.

“Ok,” I replied sitting down next to him.

“I feel sorry for you that you have to have him of all people as your father,” Guthix said with sympathy pointing at Zamorak.

“Do I always have to hear that?” Zamorak yelled from across the room. Guthix put the smoke around Zamorak’s mouth again.

“Enough!” he exclaimed. “I’ve had enough of you talking. Shut up!”

He looked at me again with wide eyes. “It’s too hard for me to sleep nowadays. The only way to get sleep is to kill my brothers. That poses another problem though. The Saradominists and the Zamorakians will conspire against me and my followers. It’ll be really hard to correct the balance then.”

“Guthix, I feel so sorry and I’ll help you try to obtain the balance you need,” I said to him.

“That’s very thoughtful,” Guthix replied, “but it's not necessary. Do what you want, even if it means for you to be evil. Just remember, I will stop you and Sarah if you two fight again.”

“Ok Guthix,” I said.

Guthix got off the bench and took off the barrier on Zamorak and removed the smoke. He told me to stand and he removed the bench. Then, in a whiff of smoke, he disappeared which left me with Zamorak.

04-Jun-2007 22:40:00 - Last edited on 28-Jun-2007 14:30:44 by Venmi

Venmi

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Most people call Saradomin Sara so I thought the name Sarah would be perfect for Saradomin's daughter. Also Bret, I can make my own characters if I wanted to :P

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05-Jun-2007 23:58:30 - Last edited on 06-Jun-2007 00:27:55 by Venmi

Venmi

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The fires around Zamorak rose high and burned a lot hotter as Guthix left. He’s been furious ever since Guthix stopped the fight. I was zoning out, wondering how Guthix’s sleep will be disturbed next time. It seemed sad that Guthix couldn’t get the sleep he wanted because Zamorak and Saradomin kept fighting. Zamorak came over to me and broke my daydream.
“This was not a dream,” Zamorak said with mesmerizing eyes which put me in a deep trance. “Guthix is not your friend. He just wants the world to be the way he wants. He doesn’t care about anybody. Don’t let him get ahead. And lastly, we exist to destroy good. Destroy the good in the world. Destroy Saradomin. Destroy Sarah.” He laughed really hard.
“Yes father,” I said still in a trance.
“Good,” he replied. “Now leave.”
He broke the trance on me, which still affected my mind none the less, and I woke up on my bed. After that dream, my life changed forever.
..: End of Prologue ::..

06-Jun-2007 01:45:33 - Last edited on 15-Sep-2007 18:37:42 by Venmi

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