mb love the chapte my favorite part is where thom goes"I don't like beggars,"
loved that part. Mb this is just a suggestion. The part where everyone screams and tries to run. Maybe when thom and jalder enter the lobby u should try and say like here exp. Thom and Jalder enter the lobby where some people are eating and talking and sitting. Just a suggestion. Cuz it sounds like those people appear in the lobby out of no where.
sorry double post im just going to comment with it. Im not trying to be mean but Codeath why can't people just have fun and make up and old bio? Mb hasn't said anything about them so he must be just fine with them. I made Farid he had nothing to do with Zamorak or with freminiks i made him and mb used him where he thought was fit for him. So people can make bios that have to do with trolls and mb will fit them in the story. Keep up the good work mb
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20-Jun-2007 02:16:59
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