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mega i see what your saying i just dont want this to end up over run by characters farid was pretty good but i still dont want thisto get all clogged up with characters like the last story. Let alone characters that are so well thoguth up.

20-Jun-2007 16:27:13

Venmi

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Alright, I'm going to end this with what I'm going to do. When I read a bio, I try to see if I can fit it. If I can't, oh well, you're not in. I love seeing the character ideas that other people have. I'll be a little more careful with my choosing and place selection. I wasn't as careful before. I'll watch myself. We clear with that? ;)

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20-Jun-2007 18:11:30 - Last edited on 20-Jun-2007 18:14:34 by Venmi

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Karen was starting to run off to Seer's when Demecrio cried in pain. “You ok!?” she exclaimed. “Yeah,” he grunted. “Don’t go to Seer's. Zamak is destroying that town. Rush to Ardougne.” “Alright,” Karen said. “They will have their death eventually!”

Bouncing through trees, after a few hours, they arrive in Ardougne.

~~~

Seeing the four warriors got me anxious. They looked like a strong group. One walked up. He had thick, charcoal robes, which seemed like the robes from Ahrims, a brother from the barrows. He had a black hood that covered his face. In his hands were two whips, which are abyssal demon’s tails that are striped with black and red. “You shouldn’t destroy this town, or the leaders of the Asgard Army will destroy you,” he said with a dark and very grim voice. He seemed like the strongest of the group.

Another person came up. He was wearing a weird armor that illuminated shades of blue and green. He also had a staff in his right hand which illuminated the same colors as the armor. The top had a crosier which I perplexedly tried to figure out what it was, but couldn’t distinguish. He always seemed to emit a smile. “Don’t sound so grim reaper. That’s why your nickname is grim reaper isn’t it?” he said comically

“You know Dan is right,” said another comically looking man. This guy seemed to be in the classic blue rune armor. He held in his right hand a crimson red dragon scimitar, the blade end emitting rays of light in the afternoon sun. “If you keep acting like that, you’ll be booed when someone tells the funniest jokes ever and you don’t laugh.”

“James, Dan, stop it,” said a stern looking man with the same crimson red armor as James’ sword. He had the same sword as James and also had a weird looking thing on his head. It looked like… the skin of a goat’s head. I was puzzled, scratching my head in confusion. “I like being laid back like you two, but we are in battle. Don’t pay attention and you will die!”

21-Jun-2007 00:17:10 - Last edited on 21-Jun-2007 00:20:43 by Venmi

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“Come on George, we’re just playing,” James said to the man. He seemed to get more in the side of comedy every second. He was toying around, twirling his sword, not even aware of Jaldar and I.

“Let’s just kill the enemy at hand and go home,” George said, his face turning a scarlet red because he was getting angry at James’ and Dan’s comical attitude.

“I’ve been trying to say that the whole time,” Reaper replied. By the way he talked and moved, I could tell he was just as annoyed as George.

I charged for James. “Look out!” George exclaimed. James didn’t have enough time to react, but Reaper wrapped his whip around my sword, stopping it in its tracks. Jaldar tried to freeze Reaper, but as the ice formed, it was shattered. Reaper froze Jaldar at that moment, leaving him dead in his tracks.

“Thanks Reaps!” James exclaimed as he turned around. He only got a nod from Reaper. Reaper walked over to Jaldar slowly, ready to kill. I turned away and attacked James. He blocked every one of my attacks and then yawned. “Is that it,” he said sleepily, coming behind me with quick speed and slashing a wound across my back.

Blood quickly gushed out of the wound as I fell, quickly realizing that even the most comical person in this group was way too strong for me. I was now worried for Jaldar because he had to face the strongest. Dan and George just crossed their arms watching. I bet they figured that those two could do it themselves. “You’ll die!” I exclaimed trying to get up. It resulted in me falling down again, more blood flowing out of the wound.

“Oh,” James pondered, smiling. “From the look of it, it seems like you’re the one who’s going to die.” He brought up his sword and prepared for a final strike.

~~~

21-Jun-2007 01:02:52 - Last edited on 21-Jun-2007 02:25:53 by Venmi

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Reaper started advancing toward Jaldar slowly, the whips ready to kill. Jaldar struggled in ice. "Still able to move eh?” Reaper asked. The ice around Jaldar broke as he destroyed it with his own ice.

“Yeah, I can move,” Jaldar said. “Now I will kill you!”

“Wait a second though; I have something to explain to you,” Reaper said. He put his face near Jaldar(c)'s ear and started whispering stuff to him.

Jaldar grinned, obviously pleased with the idea. “That’s great!” he snarled.

~~~

James was ready to deliver the final blow, grinning as he lifted his sword high in the air, the blade reflecting the light of the sun. Out of nowhere, we heard a cry of pain, along with the splattering of blood and guts.

I turned to see who it was. George was laying dead on the ground, his body split in two, blood and guts spilling out. Standing near his bloody corpse was the dark figure of Reaper.

“Reaper, how could you kill George!?” James exclaimed, completely unaware that I’m near him on the ground anymore.

“Yeah Reaper, James is right!” Dan said. “I cannot believe that you did that!” He shivered when the cheetah-speed though raced into his head. “Are you… a betrayer?”

“Yes,” Reaper said. “You got it right Dan. I hated George for a long time. I’ve always hated him. He never knew about it so I joined the clan he was in and ascended to become a leader, so all you idiots would trust me with your inconsiderate lives.”

“Reaper,” Dan said emotionally.

“My name isn’t Reaper fool!” he exclaimed. “It’s Zineryt! I am claimed to be the 7th barrow’s brother. Only I’m not good like those imbeciles. I’m pure evil!”

Dan screamed as he raised his staff high in the air. Suddenly, a thousand arrows appeared floating in the air. “I’m the only one who knows this move,” Dan said as the strain started to get to him. “Now, you’ll be impaled by the arrows and die where you stand!”

21-Jun-2007 01:28:02 - Last edited on 21-Jun-2007 01:46:24 by Venmi

Venmi

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Here's a question to ONLY those who've read ALL of BOTH of my stories.

If I had to quit one of my stories, which one should it be.

Zamorak's True Son:

Legend Of A Man Who Killed Iban: 3

21-Jun-2007 03:24:03 - Last edited on 21-Jun-2007 04:01:08 by Venmi

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