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Venmi

Venmi

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“Guthix, not you!” I exclaimed. He turned and was shocked when he saw me. “Zamak, is it you?” Guthix said, shocked to hear my voice. “It’s me, why do you ask?” “You’re the only one who understood my pain and suffering and you’re doing it! I cannot believe you. I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU!”

I was looking at his pain and suffering, yet I didn’t care because I was in pain. Suddenly, my wounds were healed and I got up. “Why did you help me?” I asked. “The reason is because you should learn from your mistake. Don’t change. Please just turn back to who you were before,” Guthix explained. “Don’t change,” he echoed as he disappeared.

Jaldar suddenly appeared from behind a tree. “How’d your fight go?” he asked holding his arm. “Pretty good,” I said, the barrier gone. Sarah was gone; Guthix probably teleported her away from us. “Farid,” I said turning to him. “Would you like to join us?” “No,” he said. “But I will come to help you fight whenever you’re in trouble. I can tell when an evil presence is being threatened.

I started walking away with Jaldar. “Thank you for your help.” “No problem,” Farid said as he disappeared.

I looked at Jaldar and he looked at me. “Time to destroy Seer's,” I asked. “Time to destroy Seer's,” he agreed.

It took us a few days, but after a long walk, we finally arrived at Seer's Village.

..:: End of Chapter 2 ::..

18-Jun-2007 21:05:34 - Last edited on 23-Jun-2007 01:48:02 by Venmi

Tahryl

Tahryl

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Name: Ericcil
Race: half human-half daemonic incarnation
Age: 16
Weapon: Livart (enchanted abyssal whip that can cast spells and counts as a staff)
Armour: Armour of Laguez (full dragon printed with the symbol of Laguez *two crossed swords with a tigers head in the middle*)
Appearance: Long silver hair, blood red eyes, tanned skin, 6'2"
Personality: Very Stern, doesn't settle well with new people
Alignment(good/evil/neutral) Evil (Laguez is the son of zamorak)
Small History: His father was a warrior knight and his mother was a powerful enchantress, both evil to the core. His mother was a part evil incarnation, and his father a trusted general of Zamorak. At a young age, he was taught how to fight, and eventually over took his parents. his father gave him his armor and his mother blessed it to be evil. This taint corrupted Ericcil's soul. Later he would be known far and wide as " The Bloodvield of Laguez".

18-Jun-2007 21:10:00

S0NofZAR0S

S0NofZAR0S

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wow these bios. im comenting on them because i dont want this story to be flooded with not so good ones. Put thought into your bios not just another parents were evil likes zamorak and dont make them all powerful like has the power of all the barrows and dont just leave unknown for the vast majority of the questions. Also this i smy biggest annoyance when people write bios with no backstorry connecting to the current story. you cant just say was son of zamoraks general. An example is when i wrote Jaldar. You may not know this but he has alot of backstory with hatred tot he freminiks wich ties him in with the story along with the femal elf(forgot her name) she has ties with loving the freminiks they are good bios descriptive original not all powerful and tied into the story.

19-Jun-2007 16:56:37

Venmi

Venmi

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Chapter 3: Seer's destruction

Both Jaldar and I hid behind a tree while we talked about how we were going to destroy Seer's. “I’m tired though,” Jaldar admitted. “Let’s rest there and destroy it the next day.” “Have you lost your mind?” I asked. Jaldar looked at me funny. “No. Let’s just do it!” “Alright,” I said looking at him very weird.

We walked around the village to try to find an inn. “Where do we find one,” Jaldar asked even though he looked at a sign on a house that said “inn” on it. “Well, I don’t know. An inn might be in front of you. See the sign?” “Oh yeah,”

Jaldar said scratching the back of his head.
We walk in and ask for two rooms. She gives us our keys and we go up to our rooms. After a long rest, Jaldar and I were ready to kill.

“Zamak,” Jaldar said while we were in my room. “How about instead of just slaughtering them, we get all their money and then kill them. We’d be rich that way.” I pondered on that idea. “I like it. We will try that.”

We went downstairs, with hidden knives in our pockets. I went up to the innkeeper, gave him the keys, and then darted behind him and put the blade to his throat. “Give us all your money and I spare your life!” Sweat appeared on her. She panicked, getting the money.

“Please let me live,” she said giving him the money. I cut her throat open, letting her blood drip all over the inn floor. “I never did like beggers,” I sneered. “Now, time for you people to die, and we’ll take your money with us!”

“Let’s get the hell out of here!” they all exclaimed. A box of ice surrounded them, stopping them from escaping. Suddenly, icicles fell like arrows into all of them, killing them on the spot. The ice disappeared and we grabbed the money out of each of their pockets. “I love this idea!” I said, smelling the gold coins as they jingled in a huge bag.

We left the inn with our money when we were suddenly stopped by four people.

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19-Jun-2007 19:41:00 - Last edited on 19-Jun-2007 19:45:44 by Venmi

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