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I had comments, but then I forgotted. So... keep it up?
13-Feb-2011 18:23:49
hm, cant believe i didnt notice this earlier. I just started reading as soon as i did.
tbh, I didnt know that the story was related to Ogre's Karamthulu idea until I read the first post. I actually did think to myself while reading The Call of the K, 'Hm, this feels a bit familiar.'
the story is a bit more confusing for me than part 1, but not because of posts but because the story goes all over the place and my brain exploded.
but I easily caught back on after some rereading
that creature (cant remember the name) that has tusks as arms did feel a bit familiar, not sure why though.
I'm just glad to have found and read this. There's a bit of humour here and there but I don't remember all of them.
Apparently everyone says ass a lot, which is something I think about a lot.
so many asses, so little time...
other than that, until next time, looks like all hell's going to break loose in a bit.n788
tbh, I didnt know that the story was related to Ogre's Karamthulu idea until I read the first post. I actually did think to myself while reading The Call of the K, 'Hm, this feels a bit familiar.'
the story is a bit more confusing for me than part 1, but not because of posts but because the story goes all over the place and my brain exploded.
but I easily caught back on after some rereading
that creature (cant remember the name) that has tusks as arms did feel a bit familiar, not sure why though.
I'm just glad to have found and read this. There's a bit of humour here and there but I don't remember all of them.
Apparently everyone says ass a lot, which is something I think about a lot.
so many asses, so little time...
other than that, until next time, looks like all hell's going to break loose in a bit.n788
16-Feb-2011 04:58:05
^I'm not gonna lie and say that using Ogre's Karamthulhu was the first thing in my mind. Because the idea didn't even occur to me until we started talking ingame and the subject of a follow up came up from nowhere
Yeah I know that there's a lot of plot threads seemingly going all over the place from the start...I personally hate it but the problem should work out in the next few chapters once things start slowly tying together and we end up with one or two groups to focus on instead of...like, 50 (thank god)
And I didn't even notice the ass part tbh (kinda chose the worst time to start this, so been too distracted to notice). Good catch?
As for the tusk creature...all I'll say is that it was in part 1...and that it was sort of a minor character at the time thanks to the Doomhound arch overshadowing just about everything after a certain point.
Yeah I know that there's a lot of plot threads seemingly going all over the place from the start...I personally hate it but the problem should work out in the next few chapters once things start slowly tying together and we end up with one or two groups to focus on instead of...like, 50 (thank god)
And I didn't even notice the ass part tbh (kinda chose the worst time to start this, so been too distracted to notice). Good catch?
As for the tusk creature...all I'll say is that it was in part 1...and that it was sort of a minor character at the time thanks to the Doomhound arch overshadowing just about everything after a certain point.
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16-Feb-2011 14:25:39
I havent read the previous threads, but I just read the prologue to get a feel for your style... and hell, you're an amazing writer Hatter
Great work!
I'll get around to reading this eventually, but I should likely read the others first
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Great work!
I'll get around to reading this eventually, but I should likely read the others first
@Fannygirdle on Twitter | Co-Owner of The Scrying Pool, a future updates and lore clan
18-Feb-2011 04:13:10
^Why thank you. I try my best
News about chapter updates: Unexpected sickness managed to set back writing...so extending the post date by another week or so (might be different from what I predict thanks to catching up with missed schoolwork and stuff).
News about chapter updates: Unexpected sickness managed to set back writing...so extending the post date by another week or so (might be different from what I predict thanks to catching up with missed schoolwork and stuff).
^+^ Antediluvian of the Draculesti Bloodline ^+^
^+^ If the Gods see fit to curse us with the Blood, then we shall raise ourselves above them ^+^
23-Feb-2011 04:35:33
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