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“So...it…it…” she babbled. She saw the gauntlets glowing faintly, and her fingernails began to take on a distinctly talon-like appearance similar to that of the Red Queen from her dreams.

Azura began shaking as her hands became more demonic and infernal chants sounded quietly throughout the room, but the vision and accompanying sounds soon passed. Shaken, she turned over and began quietly crying into her pillow. Old feelings surged up from the past. Anger. Frustration. Fear…

And hopelessness. The same hopelessness she had felt when Elder had taken her captive with the others in Varrock so many years ago, and the hopelessness brought forth by the infernal chants of the Red Queen which echoed in her mind until she finally fell asleep.

“I am everything you are,” she had said. “I am everything you are not. And more. Your power may belong to Belial, but when it is gone I shall always be there in your shadow. You can never escape me.”

^+^ The End of Chapter 5 ^+^
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02-Apr-2011 15:49:50 - Last edited on 25-Nov-2011 03:21:59 by A Mad Hatter

A Mad Hatter
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Note to self: edit 5 later to get rid of *s >.>
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On another note, this will be the last chapter for a while. Expect more adds in another month or so. :|
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^+^ If the Gods see fit to curse us with the Blood, then we shall raise ourselves above them ^+^

02-Apr-2011 15:53:32

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well, that was a long chapter, even better that it took me like 20 days to notice.

Oh that Azura, always getting herself into trouble...

She went from seeing a knight, twisting tunnels, Crawler, attacked by gut-bugs, sent into an arena, helped commit regicide, and woke up with a nice pair of gloves and fingernails.

Interesting chapter with lots of scenes with a really nice flow :P

I'm guessing that the knight will be seen again some time later.
Red Queen reminded me of Nhur, just saying :/

well, gtg wait for next chapter to come.

oh, and forgot to mention that, as usual, I couldn't help but imagine my own characters from my stories in the scenes here. I could be wrong, but I'd guess that the Enigma would really mess things up in that Fade Realm or what's-it-called. Ya, just wanted to say that :@


oh, cool. Good luck on your studies, I've already finished mine earlier today :)

21-Apr-2011 21:52:45 - Last edited on 22-Apr-2011 06:06:53 by Azigarath

A Mad Hatter
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I have no idea what the Enigma you're talking about is...or if it was in one of your stories I read in the past, I sorta forgot what it was :P

On the other hand, never thought the Red Queen would remind anyone of Nhur. Good thinking, now you just gave me some ideas to mess around with while slowly grinding through the last of my studies. :O
^+^ Antediluvian of the Draculesti Bloodline ^+^

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22-Apr-2011 02:48:27

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Update: Just started writing again now that things are slowing down a bit. Expect next chapter in about a week or so.

And...*kicks up*. Hate manual bumping >.>
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01-May-2011 05:32:36

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