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Solanumtinkr

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Daemonhiem Floor 61.

I think a real twist to the nature of the Rift is required. I don't care if the Terragard has a connection to it, they are not Elders to have created something so universally and comprehensively massive as the rift and it's multiple passages. I sometimes write stories or blurbs for characters just for fun, so I ask, what if everything is still not as it seems? So Zamorak whispered until people went mad and twisted people into abominations?

Let's not give Zamorak too much credit. He just used what was there. But there are other things that whisper in the dark. They'd happily drive people insane if it got them what they wanted.





They scramble about their existence never aware of what lay beneath their feet. Other worlds had found it. The Rift. For ages past the Elders have controlled anima, gathered, grown and harvested it. No way for others to get a look in for long term survival. But there are ways, deep in the dark if you are powerful enough. I found such a way, though I have lost count of the seasons of the Elder's harvest.

Something is different this time. Someone doing what I do, they play at being The Whisper in the Dark. They call through my rift urging someone onward. Long ago the Elders started sealing the rifts as they found them, they cast me out so many cycles that even they have forgotten why they do it.

I can hear him now. Whispering, a pretender. Other things best left alone have been disturbed, and my peace is shattered, but I am not angry or afraid. This World. Gielinor, unlike any other before. Mortals and ones like the pretender fight. They vie for any edge or advantage. They listen to the pretenders. They listen to The Whisper in the Dark now, my voice. I give them knowledge and as they use it I get stronger. And now one digs deep to save their master.

They think the rift warps life, little do they know they wander close to the forge where demons are made. Me.

Fools.

cont...
The purpose of adventure is to shine light into dark places,
Poke monsters with a sharp stick, Then steal anything that isn't nailed down!
To the Manor Born QFC 185-186-367-65788716

26-Nov-2016 19:01:20 - Last edited on 26-Nov-2016 19:14:06 by Solanumtinkr

Solanumtinkr

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Kha - Mother of Demons

There are those that would mistake my silence as a form of weakness. No roaring. No raging noises. No laugher to echo through the void. But then again only a few of my children have taken my trait of telepathy. When cast into the abyss so long ago, the first Great Revision, my enemies should have made sure I was dead. But like them I merely slept, I dreamed and I tinkered when I awoke from time to time to feed on the ashes of the latest feast provided by my enemies, the Elders.

I spawned children, the Demons. They gather for me during the long sleep. They multiply, feast and grow strong, then I can dine upon them as well. Only a fraction, but this is not evil, but the cycle of the demon of the abyss. But it has been a long time since I last saw any... They have forgotten me.

I know my children have found a world to feast on. They grow powerful, but complacent. When the next Revision starts I know they will flee here, and I would be waiting. I will teach them the meanings of remembrance and respect. Still there are those close to me, my abyssal minions are still faithful. But weak as I am, I sense others now, reaching out. My rest is disturbed, something echoes through my slumber. Rifts and echos. A brief flicker of a bridge. Unnatural...

At it's centre, I find a new creature.. a human? Ah, I see, they are trying to travel about faster. I promise from the dark. I whisper. And they listen. I know about the dark places that I made my home. I teach them. Some turn away when they learn enough. But others listen, this is good.

Time passes.

Now things flicker through the abyss like shooting stars sheading life energy, Anima, as they flee through the dark. Teleportation. My strength returns. My minions grow strong, and some of my lost children now listen to me once again. The Whisper in the Dark.

My enemies have never been weaker, once they had numbers, but no more. It's time to return. This time, I am the strong one! My new home. Daemonhiem.
The purpose of adventure is to shine light into dark places,
Poke monsters with a sharp stick, Then steal anything that isn't nailed down!
To the Manor Born QFC 185-186-367-65788716

26-Nov-2016 19:01:27

Solanumtinkr

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Continued from the above 2 posts....(Notes)

Kha is referring to Zamorak as the pretender. Zamorak is calling Bilrach to dig down and open the rift and that has drawn her attention to the works going on there. And from that point on she gets heavily involved. That would leave Zimzams none the wiser about what he has set in motion.

Or he could have another plan, overestimating his strength? Underestimating her's? Ally? Not for me to decide really, I like surprises :P Of course he could have just thought he was being sneaky at the time.

Kha is The Whisper in the Dark. It was supposedly her modus operandi for a long time to evade detection by the Elders.

Zamorak just uses the rift to contact his minion to start digging. I wonder why Zamorak never questioned all that shielding surrounding the Rift?


Kha is something a little different. They got where they are under their own steam, using their own methods, and ways to gain power that has evaded the Elders detection. While not a Jas energy linked god like the Young Gods, the term god fits for this demonic equivalent.

I suck at drawing so I'll leave that up to others. I like to write :)

I suppose you might call this a Primordial? But Demon? I hesitate to do so for these reasons:

Now for the minions. I am going paraphrase some one who hit the nail on the head Taken from a Mahjarrat Avansie comparison post click here to see original.

The top teir, not numerous, Immortal, powerful, sort of a family, should not be able to know what they are just by looking at them that is where part of the mystery comes from not being able to slap a generic label on them (think Mahjarrat), (what not to do: look at an Avansie you know it's bird people end of story, no mystery there and common as chickens), connections and relationships with dieties and others, Just read that post, it's well worth it, and may apply to any design for Kha as well.
The purpose of adventure is to shine light into dark places,
Poke monsters with a sharp stick, Then steal anything that isn't nailed down!
To the Manor Born QFC 185-186-367-65788716

26-Nov-2016 19:02:45 - Last edited on 27-Nov-2016 10:02:52 by Solanumtinkr

Corvine

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Lord Prykopys Shadum (Prykopys)




Name Origin. PROCOPIUS: Latin form of Greek Prokopios, meaning "advance, progress."
Also Known As. Lord Shadum
Gender. Male
Examine. * First time I've seen a vyre with a busted wing.
* He looks displeased.
* Way past his prime.
* It's as if I don't exist!
Alignment. Instinct and Learning
Symbol.
http://i.imgur.com/Tw5izcr.png

Godhood Tier. 5
Colours. Maroon and Gray
Adjective. Prykopian, Shadeite

HISTORY/ABOUT HERE. Please Read.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d5z4emuIjzfXga2r1-vLJ0H18hyn9_yHkOn3A5dpgPA


I had to create a Google Doc because I'd written so much about him. Worldbuilding, I tell ya! Link is 100% safe and compliant with rules.


IMGUR Gallery with other drawings of him can be found here! Please check it out!
http://imgur.com/a/LF1rt


I can't draw digitally right now, so they're all traditional. Link is 100% safe and compliant with rules.

I spent a lot of time on this, converting a Runescape OC I already had into a candidate for Godhood. I put lots of love into him. Hope you guys like this cranky old vyre professor! He just wants to retire and enjoy his godhood in peace, man. Enjoy!
proud owner of 2 runescape ocs! |
armadylean
&
guthixian

27-Nov-2016 08:36:13 - Last edited on 27-Nov-2016 17:20:47 by Corvine

Hannibus
Apr Member 2014

Hannibus

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The hubris of Zamorak, Kiln the sinner.
Kiln the sinner is driven by all that is dark, a true entity of tragedy. As he stares into the void, kiln interconnects all experience, via the shattered stream of experience. Running through the dreamlike landscape of Gielinor. The void in which kiln gazes into and controls, births demons from nature, two beasts birthing from the roots of the tree of life, a bird birthing from the sky. For these demons feed on the very nature of the landscape, distorting and shaping the blood thirsty inclinations of all Gielinor. Kiln is the hidden god, kept hidden by Zamorak, a god shrouded in mystery and darkness. For Kiln governs the blood soaked sin that encompasses all. Kilns weapon is not physical, its power resides in the mask used to gaze into the void, the ultimate weapon, ever changing experience.

27-Nov-2016 21:30:59

Saatana
Nov Member 2016

Saatana

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Tier 4 god: Tieto, god of Machinery thoughts


A scientist from Teragard who studied life form energies and was a pioneer in engineering machines on Teragard.
The scientist got sucked into the vortex with some of his inventions
as the same time as Robert the strong jumped into the vortex.
The scientist found himself in another plane, in excruciating pain, he conjoined his machines in replacement
for his arm and most of lower body. He studied the lower life forms in the realm and rejuvenated himself with the energy from these lower forms, at one point he came upon a dying life form he had not witnessed in the realm before.

The life form was dying and asked the scientist to come closer the being asked
"Do you want power?", scientist replied "No I live only for knowledge." being replied "Very well." And then the being stabbed the scientist into the scientist's head with a shard of energy and the being's life energy was injected into the scientist.

And divine knowledge filled the scientist's head and the being withered away into nothingness with this the scientist ascended to godhood.


the scientist left the realm and traveled to other planes and taught the mortals of science
and philosophies of machinery thoughts.


Through science there is magic, through magic there is science. Science is knowledge, magic is power.
In true magic there is science and in true science there is magic.









sorry for bad quality lmao O_o
EDIT: Fixed the links and some typos.

28-Nov-2016 15:51:02 - Last edited on 28-Nov-2016 16:27:23 by Saatana

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