I loved it! There were a few grammatical errors. ("No." said Ariane) should have been on the next line, but I really enjoyed the story! Had a great Christmas-y feel to it!
My only concern is how all of this fits into the Lore of the game.
First off, why do the citizens of Gielinor celebrate Christmas? Maybe event from the Gods Wars could have happened at Christmas time that they celebrate? Or just celebrating the new year!
Second, I've just realised something odd about Varrock being "the trade capital of Gielinor." Isn't Varrock quite far into the east of the continent? Wouldn't somewhere around Catherby be better suited? It would take a very long time for the non-wizards of Yanille for example to trade..
Third, will there be a quest next year featuring this trio of Signature Heroes? This "artifact" sounds very interesting!
Fourth: are horses real or not in Gielinor??? They don't appear in the game, yet are in the books by TS Church and now this lore too!
Lastly for now, I remember Mod Mark saying in the Lore Q+A about the "accent map" but what is Varrock's accent? The children seem very up-tight about their lingo, if I'm honest. Not too sure whether this was the intention or purely the fault of the author.
I'm just a man; I'm not a hero.
Just a boy who had to sing this song.
21-Dec-2012 21:35:16
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