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Welcome to RuneScape
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This is RuneScape. The world's most popular free to play MMO. Join over 200,000,000 registered adventurers as you explore the land of Gielinor, learn new skills, complete challenging quests, slay foul beasts and more. Create your own unique hero and embark on your greatest adventure; skilling, questing and fighting your way through hours of content.
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-The introduction summarizes RuneScape’s key features fairly well
-Appealing to popularity comes across as insincere and may deter some players
-Citing 200 million registered users is disingenuous, as we know that most of those accounts have been bots. Simplifying this to “millions of adventurers” would be better
A Guide to Skills
-No adjustment needed
A Guide to Quests
-Consider making a separate page for quests, similar to the ones for skills and combat. This would include:
* How to start quests
* What to expect during a quest (e.g. lore, exploration, diplomacy, puzzles, combat)
* Rewards
* Recommended quests for beginners, including the four mentioned in the current
Beginners’ Guide
A Guide to Combat
-No adjustment needed
A Guide to the World
-Consider making a separate page with the following info:
* Names and relative locations of major kingdoms/settlements/geographic features (e.g. Asgarnia, Misthalin, Kharidian Lands, River Lum, Ice Mountain, etc)
* Main points of interest (e.g. Artisans’ Workshop in Falador, Grand Exchange in Varrock)
* Background information (e.g. Lumbridge is a town for newcomers, Falador for Mining/Smithing, Varrock for seeking fame and fortune)
* Narrative/historical context (e.g. Burthorpe is fending off invading trolls from the north)
A Guide to RuneScape
-No adjustment needed
Upgrades & Extras
-No adjustment needed
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