I have quite recently had the great pleasure of at last reading this book, and despite the fact that my recent perpetual fatigue did hinder my reading, I enjoyed it very much indeed!
This is a definite improvement over Betrayal at Falador, and I think Master Church (who, the Acknowledgments at the end suggest, may soon be Mister Church - My congratulations to the Giraffe and he!) definitely has a great deal of potential as an author.
As a lore fan, I once again enjoyed the delving into the lores, and was pleased at the lack of inconsistency.
*WARNING! SPOILERS FOLLOW!*
A friend of mine and fellow lore fan, who had read the book before me, had mentioned inconsistencies... Thus, I was worried at times, especially when Aubury spoke of the Dark Lady being the supposed daughter of Lord Drakan. I imagined this might be Vanescula... Whether it is may be something to be revealed in the third novel, but I am glad Vanescula was correctly referred to as Drakan's sister later on, *and* that the matter of Ellamaria working at the Blue Moon Inn was not forgotten.
...It seems, meanwhile, that by 'inconsistencies', my friend meant the matter of the Vyrewatch being affected by magic.
Fortunately, I have already formulated a hypothesis (or possibly two) to address this.
My friend may also have mentioned something else to me, but I cannot remember... Yet I do not think he mentioned more than two points, as he could not remember anything further, and if he did have a second point (which he may not have), it must have been either unimportant or explainable if I cannot even remember it.
Now, the ending of the book was absolutely made of sequel hook, which is not a bad thing... This is an intriguing tale indeed.
On the matter of Theodore, I am not so pleased with the direction in which he has developed. I mean this from an in-story perspective, by the way, for I have no objection to this from a writing perspective, but... Lying a couple of
times with no visible discomfort? Treating his celibacy vows so absurdly lightly? He is a disgrace to his order, I say.
Anyway, I liked how Canifis and such felt like the Canifis I know so well from the game... What I very much enjoyed was the reconciliation between game and novels in the form of Gar'rth, a novel-exclusive werewolf, knowing Imre, an actual ingame character.
I do have more to say, but it is not entirely relevant to the writing and mainly my thoughts on the story itself (like the Theodore notes above), so I shall refrain from stating them.
*WARNING! MORE SPOILERS ABOVE!*
I shall conclude by saying that this has been an excellent read, and it would be a terrible loss if Master Church were to die suddenly and leave his great works without continuation.
...So for the sake of pleasurable reading, may he live long and prosper.
Well the proglogue is interesting enough (even if I didn't quite understand all of it). I've never bought a game-based book before, I might just give it a go
Here is a hint. You might just understand it better if you read Betrayal at Falador first, considering that Return to Canifis is the sequel to that book.
I warn you, the writing quality of Betrayal at Falador is not quite as good as that of Return to Canifis, but I still enjoyed it and I would say it is worth the relatively low cost.
Reread the first couple of pages of Chapter One of Return to Canifis to see what I mean, Zero Kiryu.
This sort of thing comes up in Betrayal at Falador as well, but at least he is 'grim' about it at least one point... Here, he just skirts them as though they do not exist.
@kittyphantom you mean the whole "knights can't date" thing? well i don't really mind the fact that he kind of ignores them. a little romace/drama is also nice in an action/adventure story. (so if knights couldn't date, where did the "knight in shining armor" idea come from?)
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Well, I liked it better the way it was presented in Betrayal at Falador... It would have been nice if he had guilty feelings towards Kara and such. Second Edit: To be clear, the forbidden love type thing appealed to my romantic sensibilities...
...Yet here, he ignores them, and not only interests himself in Kara, but Lady Anne as well...
As for knights in shining armour... Well, the Knights of Falador *are* holy knights.
The knights of Varrock seem to not be bound by such things, as we observe from Sir Prysin's first-born and the dastardly Lord Hyett.
*Edit: WARNING! SPOILERS ABOVE!*
The Asgarnian ale must flow.
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