ZZZZ . . .A . . . M . . . . M . .OOO . .RRR . . . .A . . . K . K
. . Z . . .A A . . .M M .M M .O . . .O .R . .R . . A A . . KK
. Z . . . A A A . .M . M . M .O . . .O . RRR . . A A A . .KK
ZZZZ .A . . . A .M . . . . M . OOO . . R . .R .A . . . A .K . .K
NO
I do not ship ZamorakxZaros.
I follow them. And Marimbo, the best t5 god.
Samsaurus99
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Make a more complex or larger one, it looks slightly limited to what you can do. Even if you think that's the best you can do, no reason not to push yourself further
.
I might try that, thanks.
ZZZZ . . .A . . . M . . . . M . .OOO . .RRR . . . .A . . . K . K
. . Z . . .A A . . .M M .M M .O . . .O .R . .R . . A A . . KK
. Z . . . A A A . .M . M . M .O . . .O . RRR . . A A A . .KK
ZZZZ .A . . . A .M . . . . M . OOO . . R . .R .A . . . A .K . .K
Lofti
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Any tips on how to improve this one? I tried to make a fourth line and loop it around some more, but I couldn't figure out how to do it.
(launches into signature teaching mode)
That looks really good! May I point out some things that could be improved, though?
¸,¤¹*ˆ*¹¤,¸
................'¤.
^ In nearly all cases, the combination ,¸ is not steep enough for a transition (as I mentioned before). It is fine to use for waves like the one at the bottom of the strikethrough, though. Also, the ¤ looks very thick next to that apostrophe, try a thinner symbol. For slightly slanted transitions, try using a fat apostrophe like this ‘ or ’
¸,¤¹*ˆ*¹¸
..............‘›.
¸¤¹¤ ¸
;.¸¸,.¤'
^ The right part sort of comes to a point, it looks kind of like a left eye. Try using more high symbols for the top. Refrain from using . right next to ¸ as a comma usually flows better. As I mentioned before, the ¤ looks a bit too thick next to the thin apostrophe. It may be best to use a lower symbol anyhow, to make it look smoother:
¸¤¹¹¤¸
;.,¸¸,.'
,›¹*ˆ*¹›¸
^ Try making both ›'s face outwards, towards the lower part of the wave. In my opinion, it gives a more smooth look to it:
,‹¹*ˆ*¹›¸
Random tips:
Try using this all-character wave? It has a lot more useful border symbols:
Make use of any symbols from the wave. For example, the fat apostrophes ‘ or ’ (as I have previously mentioned) are great for transitions that are a tad too steep for a regular apostrophe.
If you want to loop the bottom wave even further, try doing something like this:
Ruby Inferno
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Samsaurus99
said
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Make a more complex or larger one, it looks slightly limited to what you can do. Even if you think that's the best you can do, no reason not to push yourself further
.
I might try that, thanks.
ZZZZ . . .A . . . M . . . . M . .OOO . .RRR . . . .A . . . K . K
. . Z . . .A A . . .M M .M M .O . . .O .R . .R . . A A . . KK
. Z . . . A A A . .M . M . M .O . . .O . RRR . . A A A . .KK
ZZZZ .A . . . A .M . . . . M . OOO . . R . .R .A . . . A .K . .K
Nice! Maybe colour the dot background to be
dimgrey
so it is less visible?
ZZZZ
. . .
A
. . .
M
. . . .
M
. .
OOO
. .
RRR
. . . .
A
. . .
K
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K
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Z
. . .
A A
. . .
M M
.
M M
.
O
. . .
O
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R
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R
. .
A A
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KK
. Z . . . A A A . .M . M . M .O . . .O . RRR . . A A A . .KK
ZZZZ .A . . . A .M . . . . M . OOO . . R . .R .A . . . A .K . .K
it is too long
NO
I do not ship ZamorakxZaros.
I follow them. And Marimbo, the best t5 god.