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Freud

Freud

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Sorry it took so long for me to get round to it!

,‹º˜*°•.................... Merry Xmas ...................•°*˜º›,
..........`¤..•*˜...and a Happy New Year...˜*•..¤´.........
.......:::::::;;;;;;;;
¸.·°´¯`°·.¸
;;;;;;;:::::..
Freud
;;;;;;;:::::::....
¸.·°´¯`°·.¸
.......::::::;;;;;;
`°·.¸
Clueless Adventurers
¸.·°

01-Dec-2014 20:48:29

Ruby Inferno

Ruby Inferno

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,‹º˜*°•.................... Merry Xmas ...................•°*˜º›,
..........`¤..•*˜...and a Happy New Year...***..**.........

Not bad at all! Your flowing still needs a little bit of work though. Flowing is very hard to master, but once you've got it, it's second nature.

,‹º˜*°•.
..........`¤..•*˜
This --^ transition here needs a little bit of work. For starters . isn't quite low enough for a transition. The top wave looks a little pointed towards the left side, and the bottom wave isn't particularly smooth either, ¤ is a little bit thick to use next to such thin characters in most cases. The key is to aim for smooth waves. The transitions should also be smooth, and at the same/similar angle. Try aiming for something more like this:
,‹º*˜*°•¸
.............`›.,¸¸,.•*˜

For your next assignment, make a 2-liner that consists of a single wave flowing together, with no text, something like this:

¸‹^'ˆ'^›¸ ........... ¸‹^'ˆ'^›¸ ........... ¸‹^'ˆ'^›¸ ........... ¸‹^'ˆ'^›¸ ............
............ `›.,¸¸,.‹´ ........... `›.,¸¸,.‹´ ........... `›.,¸¸,.‹´ ........... `›.,¸¸,.‹´

Focus on making your transitions and waves as smooth as possible. You're doing great!
……….
¸°ˆ ›,
……
¸• ¨¨°¸
Ruby
ˆ¯¯ˆ¸

¸*ˆˆ*+;„¸¸,.`-'´ ., ¸¸ .'
¸‹*ˆˆ*›. ,¸ ¸,.'

',¸
……
'., ¸ ,.¬
ˆ ˆ ¬.,¸ ¸,.·´
Inferno

19-Dec-2014 02:36:03

Ruby Inferno

Ruby Inferno

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Jokku looks great! However I cannot promote students at my rank. Will wait for Nop. :)
……….
¸°ˆ ›,
……
¸• ¨¨°¸
Ruby
ˆ¯¯ˆ¸

¸*ˆˆ*+;„¸¸,.`-'´ ., ¸¸ .'
¸‹*ˆˆ*›. ,¸ ¸,.'

',¸
……
'., ¸ ,.¬
ˆ ˆ ¬.,¸ ¸,.·´
Inferno

19-Dec-2014 02:47:22 - Last edited on 19-Dec-2014 03:04:38 by Ruby Inferno

Nop Rs

Nop Rs

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;;:;::.:.. . . ..:.::; W­h­î†ê shôrêš ;::.:.. . . ..:.::;:;;
;;:;:::.. . ¸·*˜*•„ . áñd béýóñd, . „•*˜*·¸ . ..:::;:;;
„¹*˜*¹¤¸´ . .:; ä ƒàr grèèñ çòùñ†rÿ ;:. . `¸¤¹*˜*¹„
'·.,¸¸,.·’ ­ `. ... uñdêr ã šw šûñrîšê ... .´ ­ ‘·.,¸¸,.·'

Nice job, I might suggest using a (r) ¸ on that outside transition.

Welcome to your final year at PSS! Let me get you an assignment...
OSRS Newb Help Initiative ',
¤-¸
....
.......
¸.‹ *³ˆ;'°*• .„¸¸¸,.'
.....
ˆ.,¸¸„:‹ "¨,¸¸,.‹´

21-Dec-2014 03:04:32 - Last edited on 21-Dec-2014 03:07:09 by Nop Rs

Freud

Freud

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Done!

¸,¤º*º¤,¸
.........
¸,¤º*º¤,¸
..........
¸,¤º*º¤,¸
..........
¸,¤º*º¤,¸
.........
¸,¤º*º¤,¸
.........
.............
'‹.,¸,.›'
.............
'‹.,¸,.›'
..............
'‹.,¸,.›'
.............
'‹.,¸,.›'
.............
'‹.,¸,.›'
.......:::::::;;;;;;;;
¸.·°´¯`°·.¸
;;;;;;;:::::..
Freud
;;;;;;;:::::::....
¸.·°´¯`°·.¸
.......::::::;;;;;;
`°·.¸
Clueless Adventurers
¸.·°

21-Dec-2014 09:49:14 - Last edited on 21-Dec-2014 09:51:23 by Freud

Samsaurus99
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¸,¤º*º¤,¸.........¸,¤º*º¤,¸..........¸,¤º*º¤,¸..........¸,¤º*º¤,¸.........¸,¤º*º¤,¸.........
.............'‹.,¸,.›'.............'‹.,¸,.›'..............'‹.,¸,.›'.............'‹.,¸,.›'.............'‹.,¸,.›'

We still need to take a look at flow. Good job, you're getting there but there's still minor do's and don't's. I wouldn't use , in a transition because it makes the wave seem like it's curved, something that cannot easily be transitioned with. ' doesn't completely match with the angle of ¤,¸ Definitely some improvement since the last time, but I think settling for anything less than perfect isn't worth it :P

All you need to do is get your transitions perfect and you're there :D

I now want a 2 lined signature featuring a single flowing line that has a number of different transitions, make it at least this long:

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22-Dec-2014 12:55:06

Freud

Freud

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•°*˜º¸..........¸‹º˜*°•¸................ Runeco .................¸•°*˜º›¸...........¸‹º˜*°•
.........`¤..•*´............`¤..•*˜..... Emporium .....˜*•..¤´............`¤..•*˜´..........

Would this be good?
.......:::::::;;;;;;;;
¸.·°´¯`°·.¸
;;;;;;;:::::..
Freud
;;;;;;;:::::::....
¸.·°´¯`°·.¸
.......::::::;;;;;;
`°·.¸
Clueless Adventurers
¸.·°

25-Dec-2014 07:23:48 - Last edited on 25-Dec-2014 12:51:00 by Freud

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