Looks good, too things I might suggest. The periods next to the ¤'s are don't quite fit because of how massive the ¤ are. They also slightly throw off the transition. I would take them out, but that's a little picky.
ˆ›.,¸,.‹ˆ I would make the right half come up steeper to transition smoothly. ˆ›.,¸¸,.ˆ
For your next assignment, why don't you do the same as Makio.
Btw, I've put you in 3rd year idk why you were still in 2nd.
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For your next assignment please make a symmetrical 3-lined signature with your choice of text. Please advanced shade it. Refer to the guide on page 4 for assistance.
This one, Nop? But with 4 lines, correct?
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DianneFtw
Nice job on the shading, just remember that spaces are used in advanced shading!
Let's look at the border.
When shading, don't use a semicolon as part of the border, as it doesn't really stand out at all. Try using { or something of that sort.
`›.,¸¸,.‹´ This should come up steeper to meet the semi colon, or {, ‘.„¸¸„.‹’
¸¸¸' you need a low/mid symbol here ¸¸„.'
°`ˆ´° — ´ and ˆ are the same height, try to use a symbol lower than ´ like °*ˆ*° or °”ˆ“°
¸·´ this curves the wrong way, instead of ascending steeply then flattening out, it should go the opposite way like ¸‹‘ Sorry if that sounds confusing
¸„¤³'*'³¤„¸ avoid using commas or „ in a transition, it makes it look more like
¸„.‹¹*¹›.„¸
;............;
;............;
instead of
...¸·¹*ˆ*¹·¸
.,'..............',
;'................'; (obviously exaggerated)
Nice job, now how about a 3-liner, advanced shaded. Remember to use spaces.
Nice mirroring job ruby, the mirrored side looks the same as the original side, which is good. However, now that you've had a little experience with the mirroring I want you to maintain proper flow on the mirrored side. Also ¸*¸ doesn't quite flow, it's more of a triangle