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Ruby Inferno

Ruby Inferno

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Sam, you forgot about Mogul... I'll grade it, don't worry. :P
……….
¸°ˆ ›,
……
¸• ¨¨°¸
Ruby
ˆ¯¯ˆ¸

¸*ˆˆ*+;„¸¸,.`-'´ ., ¸¸ .'
¸‹*ˆˆ*›. ,¸ ¸,.'

',¸
……
'., ¸ ,.¬
ˆ ˆ ¬.,¸ ¸,.·´
Inferno

18-Jan-2014 11:15:40

Ruby Inferno

Ruby Inferno

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Hey Mogul, that looks really good! I think it looks a little better without the extra waves, they make the signature a tad (but only a tad) crowded.

Sam is mean. He skipped yours, so I will grade it instead. ;)

ˆ'«¸ ¸»''ˆ
^ There's a mirroring issue here. On the left side, there is one apostrophe, while there is two on the right side. Either add an apostrophe to the left side, or remove one from the right. :)
ˆ''«¸ ¸»''ˆ or ˆ'«¸ ¸»'ˆ

ˆ'‹¸
:... '¸
^ I find that ‹ or › combined with ¸ doesn't flow so well with steeper transitions. Remember, transitions should connect to similar angles as themselves. Try a higher symbol instead?
ˆ'¹¸
:... '¸


'‹¸
.. 'ª«¬,¸
^ The ' combined with the ª in the bottom wave doesn't usually flow well in transitions, as it is not very steep. Also, « and ¬ are very close in height, and the following ,¸ make the wave drop lower a little abruptly. Try using a little less symbols for that specific wave, especially for the higher part of the it. Remember, as I said before, transitions should connect to similar angles as themselves:
' ¸
.. `›.,¸

General tips about the overall signature:

Remember what I said before? In my opinion, »/› should be pointing in the direction they are going if you see what I mean. I explained that really badly (I wasn't so experienced in signature teaching). What I really meant was: In my opinion, »/› look best facing outwards, towards the lower part of the wave.

In the extra notes, I said you should try using a variety of symbols. While you did do this for some parts, most of the waves seem to mostly use ª and ‹ (plus the other arrows). Try mixing them up a bit, perhaps use other high symbols such as that have a similar height to ª such as ¹ ² ³ º etc., don't be afraid to try new symbols. The more different symbols, the better!

Make another 4 liner, shaded, with your choice of text. Don't use ª or ‹ / the other arrow varients for this one. Use symbols such as (but use others, too): + ° ™ * - •
……….
¸°ˆ ›,
……
¸• ¨¨°¸
Ruby
ˆ¯¯ˆ¸

¸*ˆˆ*+;„¸¸,.`-'´ ., ¸¸ .'
¸‹*ˆˆ*›. ,¸ ¸,.'

',¸
……
'., ¸ ,.¬
ˆ ˆ ¬.,¸ ¸,.·´
Inferno

18-Jan-2014 12:07:12

Lofti
Oct Member 2018

Lofti

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Assignment # 16

` ‹ ¸ - ¨ - ¸
;;;;;;:::::::::.......
'Makio
.......:::::::::;;;;;;;
¸ - ¨ - ¸ › ´

;;::..
;;::.
¨-¸
;;;;;;::::::.......
Plays
.......::::::;;;;;;
¸-¨
..::;;
¸´
..::;;
;;::..
¸´
;;;:::...
¨-¸
;;;:::...
¸-
RuneScape
...:::;;;
¸-¨
...:::;;;;
..::;;

¸ ‹ ´
;;;;;;:::::.....
¨-„¸„-¨
.........
\+/
........
¨-„¸„-¨
.......:::::;;;;;;
` › ¸

18-Jan-2014 17:50:04

Nop Rs

Nop Rs

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` ‹ ¸ - ¨ - ¸;;;;;;:::::::::.......'Makio.......:::::::::;;;;;;;¸ - ¨ - ¸ › ´
;;::..`¸;;::.¨-¸;;;;;;::::::.......Plays.......::::::;;;;;;¸-¨..::;;¸´..::;;
;;::..¸´;;;:::...¨-¸;;;:::...¸-RuneScape-¸...:::;;;¸-¨...:::;;;;`¸..::;;
¸ ‹ ´;;;;;;:::::.....¨-„¸„-¨.........\+/........¨-„¸„-¨.......:::::;;;;;;` › ¸

Nice job Makio, you're picking this up quickly. I believe what Sam meant by varying transitions was that to try not to make a straight line like
¨-¸
.....¨-¸ but instead curve it a bit like

`-¸
.....`¸

The curve on the outside is excellent! The only suggestion I might make is to change ¸´ to ¸‘ so that it fits more into the curve.

This wave seems to look more like a pyramid than a wave ¸ - ¨ - ¸ so let's add in some mid-high symbols. Try ¸ -*'¨'*- ¸

¨-„¸„-¨ the bottom of this comes to a point, try rounding it out some ¨-.„¸¸„.-¨

This is a very nice looking signature let me get you another assignment.**

*******Vop Patar
Which student is to complete this? Makio Ayase
Line 1: Makio Ayase
Line 2:
Line 3:
Line 4: Alt-Spaced
Do you want Normal, Clean, Messy, or Leet text? Clean
What browser are you using? (IE, Firefox, etc) GC
How many lines do you want the signature to be? (1-4) 4
Do you want it Shaded, Alt Spaced, Regular, or Character Reduced? Alt-spaced
Extra Notes: Focus on your transitions, and balance your low/mid/high symbols. Refer to the alt-spacing guide on page 4 for help.
OSRS Newb Help Initiative ',
¤-¸
....
.......
¸.‹ *³ˆ;'°*• .„¸¸¸,.'
.....
ˆ.,¸¸„:‹ "¨,¸¸,.‹´

19-Jan-2014 18:24:26 - Last edited on 19-Jan-2014 18:30:49 by Nop Rs

Lofti
Oct Member 2018

Lofti

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Assignment # 17

Alt spacing is definitely my favorite type of shading (if that's what it's called)

.¸ ºˆ¯ˆº ¸¸­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ 'Måkîø Ãÿåšé­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ¸¸ ºˆ¯ˆº ¸
.'¸­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ¸›º*˜*›¸­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ¸‹*˜*º‹¸­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ¸'
­. ­ `-,¸¸,-´­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ `›¸­ ­ Ã|†-ŠÞäçêd­ ­ ¸‹´­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ `-,¸¸,-´
­. ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ` › „ ¸ ¸ „ ‹ ´­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­

19-Jan-2014 20:49:03 - Last edited on 19-Jan-2014 23:23:14 by Lofti

Nop Rs

Nop Rs

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Looks good Makio, only I can't view it properly because I am using Google Chrome. When you make a signature for someone using Google Chrome you need to put a symbol such as a period before each alt-spaced section on a line. If you don't do this then all the spaces before the first symbol won't shown up.

This is what I sêe...

¸ ºˆ¯ˆº ¸¸­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ 'Måkîø Ãÿåšé­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ¸¸ ºˆ¯ˆº ¸
'¸­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ¸›º*˜*›¸­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ¸‹*˜*º‹¸­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ¸'
`-,¸¸,-´­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ `›¸­ ­ Ã|†-ŠÞäçêd­ ­ ¸‹´­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ `-,¸¸,-´
` › „ ¸ ¸ „ ‹ ´­ ­ ­

So fix that and I'll grade the sig :P
OSRS Newb Help Initiative ',
¤-¸
....
.......
¸.‹ *³ˆ;'°*• .„¸¸¸,.'
.....
ˆ.,¸¸„:‹ "¨,¸¸,.‹´

19-Jan-2014 22:50:19

Nop Rs

Nop Rs

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.¸ ºˆ¯ˆº ¸¸­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ 'Måkîø Ãÿåšé­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ¸¸ ºˆ¯ˆº ¸
.'¸­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ¸›º*˜*›¸­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ¸‹*˜*º‹¸­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ¸'
. ­ `-,¸¸,-´­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ `›¸­ ­ Ã|†-ŠÞäçêd­ ­ ¸‹´­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ `-,¸¸,-´
. ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ` › „ ¸ ¸ „ ‹ ´­ ­ ­ ­ ­ ­

Ok much better. .'¸ ‹-- you don't need a period here, as the apostrophe is enough

ˆº ¸¸ you need a mid-low symbol here. As a general rule, you almost always need a comma or a „ next to a ¸

`-,¸¸,-´ The - seems to be a little too high, try using › and maybe add a period `›.,¸¸,.‹´

¸›º*˜*›¸­ Try to have the arrows facing outwards. Also there is too great of a height difference between * and › Try ¸‹º*˜*¹›¸

Good job, you're transitions are very smooth in this signature and the design is quite nice. For your next assignment please try to focus on balancing your low/mid/high symbols.

­For your next assignment please make an unaligned 3-lined signature, your choice of text.
OSRS Newb Help Initiative ',
¤-¸
....
.......
¸.‹ *³ˆ;'°*• .„¸¸¸,.'
.....
ˆ.,¸¸„:‹ "¨,¸¸,.‹´

19-Jan-2014 23:53:22

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