I found this from the Story Exchange, but don't worry you don't have to read mine, I was reading this as a reader, I'll come to another thread when I want to exchange.
Anyway, you should've taken fire's advice and spaced out the posts.
It was okay, but ... I don't know, just not my style I guess. Nice try for your first romance. I haven't done romance before myself, I would but I'm already writing the story I've got on the Exchange.
15-May-2009 18:21:01