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Hurricaneria
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She showed up at the house at exact time, and she was shaking in terror.
"Jessica, may you please come in?" the reporter called.
Jessica went to him and he led her inside the abandoned home.
She began to feel a presence in the room.
"Are you fine?" the reporter asked.
"Yes..." she replied.
She began to feel dizzy and went into a gaze. There was background music...but she couldn't tell what the song was. She felt arms around her waist coming from behind her, then she reconized the backround song...it was "Wait/The Whisper Song" by The Ying Yang Twins. Then she felt someone whisper in her ear, the voice itself wasn't like in the old song..."Hey, how you doin' little mama let me whispa in yo ear," She then reconized the whispering voice...it was her dead boyfriend, Alan. The lyrics continued a bit, "Mind if I touch it, and see if it's soft." Then she felt a hand on the cheek of her hinney, then it quickly backed off, "Na I'm just playin' let just say I can't,"
She began to feel a sensation; no one was looking, but she could swear it was Alan, alive and well, but she knew it was probably his ghost showing his love to her.
The song continued, and she held out her lips to be kissed at the end. She got that kiss and the hallusination disapeared.
"Jessica, we got the voice of the ghost on tape! Listen, I asked it how it felt."
The tape played, then she heard a forbodding voice from the tape recorder, "Loved..."
"How can he feel loved when he's all alone?" the reporter asked.
"I think I may know..." Jessica said.
"Oh...you must feel much better now eh?"
"Maybe..." she grinned.
"Ohhoho, there's that look," the reporter said.
"Alan, if you can hear me, say you love me," Jessica said.
Then she heard that forbodding voice again, in an echo, "I love you..."
She began to shiver.
"I'll come back later okay?"
No one answered.
"Okay I'll be going now..."
She found a box of chocolates in the corner, "I love you."
("You'll be in my Heart" by Phil Collins) :|

02-Jun-2008 02:19:15 - Last edited on 05-Jun-2008 22:10:22 by Hurricaneria

showgirl123

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That was short. But, who cares? :P
I don't think you should post what they're saying under each other a lot. Trying explaing/describing how they say it, or how they feel, breifly of course.
Other than that, it was a great story. Keep on writing! :)
- Showie ×

13-Jun-2008 02:15:07 - Last edited on 13-Jun-2008 02:15:18 by showgirl123

Hurricaneria
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Hurricaneria

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'Cause I'm the author!
MUAHAHAHAHA
Anyway, it is based on real events, no one died though and there were no ghosts lol

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27-Jun-2008 01:21:43 - Last edited on 27-Jun-2008 01:23:38 by Hurricaneria

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