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Agile Aqua
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Agile Aqua

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Well since my other post on this thread was relatively short and showed none of my actual appreciation towards you for writing such an awsome piece, I'm going to post again and try to get across my point a little better. Capiche?
Anyways, to start off I liked the way you portrayed the Roald's dislike for his brother, and mostly everyone else. And I really liked how you showed that Edward was 'gay. It was really fun reading the story as Reldo looked onto the seen at the Altar. Totally engrossed me.
Now then, the end. How Edward was so starved for meat that he ate a rat was really gross, but also enormously entertaining. Then when Reldo and Roald broke him out, just for him to run away.
Then the epiloge where Roald was king and regretting his actions. All in all an awsomely written story.

02-Nov-2010 23:46:07

Englishkid62

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Thanks, Aqua, you are the best :)
Edit: Wow, I spent such a long time trying to cramp all the praises into two posts. I decided to omit comments from those who hadn't finished, as their opinions might change.
I will be posting an Ad here shortly, which is the ad for Brotherly Love that I will start the post everywhere, hehe :P

02-Nov-2010 23:50:41 - Last edited on 03-Nov-2010 00:38:39 by Englishkid62

Englishkid62

Englishkid62

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‘I think it is a choice.’
Is it a choice? At what point do we decide it is a conscious decision? How do we tell the right from the wrong, when we could be just as confused as those we condemn? It is, of course, not everyday that we tell our brothers we love them. Under what obligation were we to love them anyway?
This story follows the lives of two brothers, and how, in a confused moment, a catastrophe was born.

~~Brotherly Love~~
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'It was you and you alone who can write something so remorselessly heartrending...You speak truly of human nature and the most ugly of our flaws, our judgment. How we judge, who we judge, and the standards with which we judge...There is nobody who can so completely grip an audience, so weave his life into a story, and create such relatable characters.' --NovelistElly
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03-Nov-2010 00:39:56 - Last edited on 03-Nov-2010 00:50:36 by Englishkid62

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