The great amounts of elevated diction can make your poems a little hard to understand, but I still enjoy the embellishment they add. All of your poems have a very nice flow to them. I greatly enjoyed reading this collection.
Do you mind if I recommend this collection on my own collection thread?
Yam, I've heard that one before
The fact of the matter is I find it hard to break away from doing this style and putting everything I've got into a poem. It's a case by case sensitive issue though, some like it and some find it too much.
As the Immortal Bard once said: "Brevity is the soul of wit"
As for adding it to your collection, of course I don't mind!