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free bump, excellent story!
i loved it!
wonder what my character would say if he could speak up?
would he be annoyed that sometimes i make him chop trees for 3 days? lol

i give it a 3,000,000,000,000,000,000/10

27-Aug-2006 17:56:30 - Last edited on 27-Aug-2006 17:57:18 by E F D D

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Very nice story you've got here.

The grammar's perfect, I can understand what's happening.

It's pretty original IMHO, and I like how you write in first-person.

8/10. I couldn't see anything wrong with the story, but there isn't really a reason why I would think it is perfect. Nonetheless, keep up the good work.

28-Aug-2006 11:50:57

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