Thrilling story, Dreamweaver.
This is truly an epic, in my opinion. You manage to combine mystery and horror with a classic adventure theme. You mix humor in lavishly, at that.
It seems to me that you're quite capable of making a very detailed imagery in the mind of your reader - and this with only a few choice words.
Furthermore, I think this would make an excellent quest sequence for RuneScape - perhaps if changed just a little, where the player has to help Nil*i, lol. Just a thought.
Anyways, I thoroughly enjoyed this unique story - old as it is. Thank you for sharing it, I look forward to any further works by you. =D
08-Apr-2010 22:57:21