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xxsuperstarx

xxsuperstarx

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Just finished reading "Nildi of Keldigram," and I must say it is the best story on the forums by far. It is actually better than most published books I have read. In fact, it is my second favorite "book" of all time. It is a semi-long read, but trust me it will go by fast, and you will be left wanting more; and wishing it was longer. Dreamweaver is truly a master of writing.

Posted on my guild. Dream, your writing skills are superb.

24-Oct-2009 05:14:49

Tava60

Tava60

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Oh Dream I think its time for me to post my in depth thoughts of this. Of course I don't think their is most left to say but if their is, I shall say it.

Now your prolouge is in my opinion nice, because you have it so different then the regular ones. Though I do not quite understand its meaning.

Now I must say the first Chapter "Abroad" is quite short, but to the point. The second chapter I must say is spectactular, its chalked full of deatail. With the Third Chapter is repitive, same compliments as before. Only thing I have to say is that you say that "by the grace and foresightedness of our outer guards that he was not shot as he" Which intrigues me because dwarves (or as far as i've seen) don't carry bows and I wouldn't know what they could shoot with. A bit odd they cut out the poor Dwarf's skin. A tad gross if you ask me. Now I do just love how you put the time to get places in porportion, such as 20 minutes to get from the Inn to The Wizard's Guild, in Chapt. 4.

Well thats all for now. Oh yes your avatar remind of Rick the Butler.

24-Oct-2009 17:49:24

Dreamweaver
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Dreamweaver

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Wow, I'm not used to all this attention, folks!

Chuk -- Yep, pressure is mounting for a sequel. I might revisit my offline plans of that and see if I can make some more progress.

Final Step -- You are truly flattering with your comments. I am very happy indeed that you found it enjoyable, and humbled that you rank it so highly. May I ask which guild you run? I'll have to pay you a visit over there.

Tava -- Thanks a lot for reading, my friend, and I appreciate your comments greatly! I look forward to hearing what you think as you progress through Nildi. :)

Frodo -- Yay, another potential reader! Thanks for coming here and posting. I hope you get into this tale and find it enjoyable!

Dreamweaver

25-Oct-2009 01:38:44 - Last edited on 25-Oct-2009 01:39:51 by Dreamweaver

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