Yep, I agree that they need to be tied to the shadows more closely -- perhaps in a way that isn't apparent immediately though. Maybe that could even be something that doesn't appear until a sequel when those thieves turn out to not quite be who we thought they were initially... Lots of ideas, so little time!
Chuk, of course I don't mind you posting here. It's not like I'm getting to page 200 any time soon!
Dreamweaver
23-Nov-2008 17:59:31