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Patriotic Br

Patriotic Br

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Whoa, sorry I didn't get around to providing those mechanics errors, I don't know what happened, truly. :P

I'll get right to it then!


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27-Feb-2008 03:29:33

Patriotic Br

Patriotic Br

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Hmm, something pulled a trick on me because I didn't find the errors I was looking for! Sorry, maybe I made a mistake :|

I'll go and fix your score, but I'm not a reviewer in the Aradougne Story Guild anymore so I can't really tell them to fix it, although you can.


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27-Feb-2008 03:38:18

Patriotic Br

Patriotic Br

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Okay, I fixed your score and it is now at 93.6% that's pretty good! It would have been much higher if your description would have been better.

Description is your enemy: I have his arms behind his back, and all you gotta do is unload some tightened fists into his gut. If you don't do that, I gotta release him before he whips around and strikes me!


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27-Feb-2008 03:44:51

Dreamweaver
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Dreamweaver

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Thanks for popping back in here with the updates, Patriotic. I wasn't worried about the score (though I appreciate you updating it for me), but I *did* want to be sure that I wasn't missing any silly errors in the piece. :)

Description will indeed be more of a focus in future writings!

Dreamweaver

29-Feb-2008 08:43:24

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Smok Taunter

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Story Reader Exchange is now having a re-submission policy. If you don’t re-subscribe between the 20th and the 30th of the month, every month, your story will be removed from the list. You may re-apply afterwards if you wish, but you must have a good reason why you did*’t re-apply when you were supposed to; otherwise, you can’t come back in. This month also includes a month where you must re-apply.

Thank you!

~ Taunter, assistant of the Story Reader Exchange ~

07-Mar-2008 22:57:28

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