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Nildi of Keldagrim

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Dreamweaver
Aug Member 2003

Dreamweaver

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Thanks for the bumps and comments, all.

As much as I appreciate that unexpected review, Slick Axmen, I'd love to hear more specific comments on what worked (and more importantly, did not work). Also, if you noticed some particular errors (You gave 4 of 5 for spelling for instance), I'd apprecaite them being pointed out so I may learn and correct accordingly.

Finally, you have "rising action" and "rizeing action" as two lines. I'm a little unclear on what is intended there.

Much obliged!

Dreamweaver

08-Feb-2007 06:27:15 - Last edited on 14-Feb-2007 10:39:27 by Dreamweaver

Dreamweaver
Aug Member 2003

Dreamweaver

Posts: 3,790 Adamant Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
I appreciate your kind words. Thanks very much. and I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

I'll have to decline your offer of jointly authoring a story though. I don't tend to find steady time to write, and I'd just let you down with a lack of progress, interspersed with the very occasional and unexpected burst of creativity.

But thank you anyway :)

Dreamweaver

21-Feb-2007 09:57:14

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