Thanks for the bumps and comments, all.
As much as I appreciate that unexpected review, Slick Axmen, I'd love to hear more specific comments on what worked (and more importantly, did not work). Also, if you noticed some particular errors (You gave 4 of 5 for spelling for instance), I'd apprecaite them being pointed out so I may learn and correct accordingly.
Finally, you have "rising action" and "rizeing action" as two lines. I'm a little unclear on what is intended there.
Much obliged!
Dreamweaver
08-Feb-2007 06:27:15
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