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Austinsmname

Austinsmname

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EDIT: I read more of it and found it to be a cool story.
and joppi, I typed mine on microsoft word, I have all the spelling checked by my mom, she went to college, and you probably dont even know what my story is called!

20-Jan-2007 15:29:08 - Last edited on 23-Jan-2007 23:35:50 by Austinsmname

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That was great. It might even deserve a sequel? Maybe, yes, maybe not? Great last chapter! I thought it was really magnificant. Wonderful use of, um..., avoiding the imaturaty factor. Still, very well done. I would rate this a 9/10 overall. Spelling would be 8.5/10. (There were a few mistakes.) Grammer would be 9/10. Plot developement would be 9.5/10. (Very good job here.) Anyways, good job, and I was very pleased reading this.

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20-Jan-2007 20:52:32

Joppi J

Joppi J

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Imagas

20-Jan-2007 15:29:08
that was sooooooo a waist of time, i look forward to squashing you in the competition

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LMAO!

I read your chapter thing, and Anne is going to pwn you if that's your best.

Plus, Anne could beat you with grammar and spelling alone, seeing as you have little grasp of it yourself.

Oh yes, I forgot.

Pwned.

21-Jan-2007 00:23:49

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