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Cicobe1

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The following is for my own organizational purposes.
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~~Applicant information~~
Nickname: Muffins
Time Zone: GMT+1
Is English your first language: No
A story that demonstrates the best of your talent: The Cresent Moon
Number of story posts on the said story above : 16
The QFC of your story: 49-50-347-58757814
Your specialties : Never the same really, changes with my mood.
Additional information about yourself : I don't like english (not the person)
I DO want my entry and its complementary review to be archived in The Library.
1) Character
2) Description
3) Plot
4) Spelling + Grammar
5) Flow

25-May-2009 16:02:42

Cicobe1

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"I'm starting to wonder if I made the right decision becoming a mime. Last week I tried something different. It all began at the show...”

Here I am, in my new, washed mime clothes. The white striped black shirt I wear with pride and my mime mask on my head. And as always, I only have four persons watching me. The stage is set, now its just my turn. This should be a normal preformance, but somehow I did*’t do it. It were always the same, I made my part, and they, with their prejudiced opinions laughed at me.
So, in an attempt to break the circle, I did something new. When I walked up to the stage, I repeated in my mind what I was going to do.
Center of the stage, no turning back now. Then itstarted:
“Hi everyone... I think I’ll tell you a story today...” This is it! Did they like it?
“One week ago, it was night...” Then I was interrupted by the audience.

25-May-2009 16:03:26

Cicobe1

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*There is no night in Runescape, c’mon have you ever seen one? The only way you’ll get night is by turning brightness to bottom.* Apparetly, they were going to make fun of me all this time.
“Ehm... And a small boy, kind and not very funny...” That was all I could say before
*That’s you! Don’t lie. Why would a mime tell us a story anyway? You’re supposed to be quiet.* Can’t they ever stop?
That show ended up with me running from the stage. Now I don’t do thing’s like that, but it made me think. Why do I even keep doing this? No one watches this, except those four that makes fun of me. I could just leave, leave and never come back. Who would care if I did? I’ll think overnight about this...

"That’s about everything I’d like to tell you. I’m sure you’ll read this and think 'Is he crazy?' But no, I’m not crazy. I’m just tired of my life and I’d like to try something new. So, firemaking, here I come”

30-May-2009 17:15:26

Cicobe1

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Wow, that was a bit short

Hope it's enough.

For this stroy I used the mime random event, but instead of a guest the mime was all alone out there.
Since I’m not the person that writes essays so I’ll just answer your questions. I’m telling the reader that it*s never to late to change the way you live. Every decision you make isn’t written in stone. You can change. I can’t say: This and this is different, since I’ve only been here for one-two weeks now.

30-May-2009 17:16:54

JUST2BEAST4U

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~~Applicant information
Nickname (A name that would be shown in the member’s list): Psych
Time Zone: Dunno
Is English your first language (this will not lead to a more generous mark scheme, if you indicated otherwise): Yes
A story that demonstrates the best of your talent: Assassin
Number of story posts on the said story above (Must be more than 15): More than 15
The QFC of your story:49-50-631-58628009
Your specialties (Genre wise): Fantasy
Additional information about yourself (Things I should know about you): I love to read and write, I own the IWP (Infinite Writers Program), Assassin isn't my best work its just the one with over 15 posts(No one ever reads my stories). I am a member of the Novelists guild.
I DO want my entry and its complementary review to be archived in The Library.

30-May-2009 17:36:05

JUST2BEAST4U

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The voyage:

The night sky was a peculiar shade of crimson reflecting off the cold unforgiving sea. I did not know what it had in store for me nor what grief it had brought to many others. It was time though, for the boat on which I rode to take off toward the unending blue. If I were to have died here my heart would have remained at rest to what I thought to be the cool sound of a soothing ocean. But no, I was going out to see on a trip from which I would not return. I walked slowly as my leather boots made the wooden dock creak. My long black hair waving through the cool sea breeze. My amulet illuminated by the light of the sun. The amulet was a gift from my mother when I went off to adventure the lands of runescape. I reached the gangplank and walked across. The voyage was to take us across to the land of the fauns. We would never make it there though. I have never been on a boat before so as soon as the boat was underway floating across the sea, I was over the bow throwing up. The sky turned pitch black soon after we departed. I went to my room that smelled as if something had crawled up in and died. I was alone in this room. There were no beds, no sinks just a floor and a roof. Then I heard thunder and the boat was rocking relentlessly. There were screams above deck. There was a crash and I could hear water rushing into the boat. Then water started to fill my room. I ran to my door. I ran up to bow falling many a times on my way. The sea did not give up I jumped overboard, folding fast to my amulet, away from the sinking boat and was swallowed whole by the deadly unforgiving killer known as the sea.
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The end

30-May-2009 17:58:42 - Last edited on 30-May-2009 18:20:20 by JUST2BEAST4U