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Serene End
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"You use to be our commander! How could you...."
"Enough of your annoying questions. I just came here to tell you that judgment of if you die or not will be decided soon. In the meantime, rest easy." Before Dante left the room. He heard Frederick calling to him. "What is it Frederick?"
"What about Enyo? She's dead and you don't even look hurt or sad. Do you even care about her!? Do you even love her!?" Frederick shouted.
"Love is a strong emotion - but who needs love when you've got power!"
"What has happened to you? You're corrupt; you're different."
That day changed the way the world worked. Dante became the ruler of all. Dante wanted to be praised like a god; he forced people to do such. And the world never saw the end of suffering.
The World was truly in Flames.
׺°”˜`”°º×׺°”˜`”°º× ׺°”˜`”°º×׺°”˜`”°º× ׺°”˜`”°º
׺°”˜`”°º×Alternative Ending Finished׺°”˜`”°º×
׺°”˜`”°º×׺°”˜`”°º× ׺°”˜`”°º×׺°”˜`”°º× ׺°”˜`”°º×
I had a lot of fun making, thinking, creating, and seeing this story turn into what it is today. I'm really glad that I had great people to support me to FINALLY finish a story. Reading the comments and watching this story bloom made this one of my favorite and greatest achievements in my life.
Thank you for helping me FINALLY finish a story. Thank you for supporting me. Thank you for helping me. Thank you for making this one of my most remembered memories. Thank you FOR EVERYTHING! Words cannot express how grateful and thankful am I to all that have commented and read my story. So, let's wrap it up with the last words.
Thank you very very VERY much for reading my story. I appreciate it so very much! ^_^ ,
~Biomaster7
The end
is only
the beginning...

02-Mar-2009 20:32:26 - Last edited on 06-Mar-2009 23:28:31 by Serene End

Serene End
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Serene End

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FAQ Time!:
Q: How was Dante able to live from the Third Age to Fifth?
A: Because Dante became the Balanced One. The Balanced One is immortal.
Q: What about Ambrotos? What's the detail behind him?
A: Well, he's a Half-God (hence the reason when he got stabbed he didn't flinch.) and his real name is Ambrosios Xiuhcoatl.
Q: When is Dante's birthday?
A: The same as Spero's birthday; December 29th, the Divine Dusk.
Q: Why was Dante and Spero able to hurt Alrous but the other weren't?
A: Only a Balanced One can hurt or kill a Unbalanced One and Unbalanced One is the only one that can kill or hurt a Balanced One. Which is the reason the Elder Druids wanted Spero so much; because he was balanced.
Q: Can you hint where you got the inspiration of your characters from?
A: Well, I mainly got my ideas from the Soulcalibur series.
For Example: Cameron. The idea was created from Raphael Sorel from SC4. But his other self I got off Edward Cullen from the Twilight series :P . Another character I thought up of was Alrous. He came from Charade from SC2. Though the thought of him being all powerful came from Night Terror from SC3. The idea of Dante came from Yun-seong, Siegfried Schtauffen, and a created character my brother made on SC4 lol. And the idea of Enyo came from Hildegard von Krone from SC4. Those are the most obvious thoughts that come to mind.
Q: What was your favorite Chapter?
A: Well, thinking about how to make the Final Chapter was pretty fun. But all and all, I think my favorite was probably Chapter 6 of Part 2: Within the Walls.
Q: Least favorite Chapter?
A: Ummm...I don't think I have any.
Q: Favorite characters?
A: My list from my characters (no bio characters):
1. Dante
2. Alrous
3. Frederick
4. Spero
5. Stephanie
6. Cameron
7. Enyo
8. Zenovia
9. Claire
10. Ambrotos
The end
is only
the beginning...

02-Mar-2009 20:56:59 - Last edited on 03-Mar-2009 02:04:29 by Serene End

Serene End
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Q: What is the translation to what Alrous chanted during the Final Chapter?
A: Here you go:
"Let a flood of blood come down from the skies of hell as the world suffers in the wave of my truest power. Let the world fear the great rancor oblivion. Let the world know the great demonic judgment. Let every single being that breathes die at the hands of dark indignation!"
Q: Stephanie and Cameron, details between the two?
A: Well, just reading the story you know MOST of the detail behind the two -- Cameron is a corrupt man, lonely and hurt for several reasons and he looked many years for another person with the same qualities -- and soon enough he finds the Apollo family. But there wasn't something I did example during the story; during the part where Stephanie was poisoned. Cameron told Stephanie saying "It's an extremely deadly type of Kalphite poison that is unable to stop once within the body of a human". Well, here's one thing -- he lied. The poison was actually hardly life-threatening. He wanted Stephanie to become apart of his bloodline so much that he lied in order for it to happen. And he gets his wish.
Q: What's next?
A: My next story is a spin-off of The World in Flames. It's placed 19 years in the future of the present days of RuneScape. The title is The Rays that Shine or Rays that Shine. Whichever I feel like having :P (See preview below)
Speaking of which -- the story has been unleashed upon the Forum! QFC: 49-50-430-58536684
Got a question regarding the story? Just post it up and I'll answer it ;) (Hopefully :o)
The end
is only
the beginning...

02-Mar-2009 21:07:12 - Last edited on 24-Mar-2009 01:14:43 by Serene End

Ark Von Doom

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Sweet... That was an awesome ending and I'm the first to read it! Yay me! There were some errors I noticed but I'm going to look for those later, first time throuhg I'm just basking in the glow of awesomeness :P
Ooh actually I do have one question: what's next? :p
I find it neccesary to say: Mountain Dew Baha Blast. Better than the original.

02-Mar-2009 21:27:09 - Last edited on 03-Mar-2009 04:22:11 by Ark Von Doom

Seph
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Seph

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Wow...

That ending was so good that it seems I have spontaniously Combusted....

No need to worry about me, the Fire Department should take care of it...

*5 minutes later a huge blast of water nails Wigwam*

Thats better...

That Chapter PWNED!!!!! Beyond Imagination!!!!! Beyond the reach of Mountain Dew - thats right, MOUNTAIN DEW!!!!!

NOW WE MUST CELEBRATE!!!!! SOMEONE PREPARE THEIR HOUSE FOR A PAR-TAY!!!!!

~/*\~W!GW@M126~/*\~
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

02-Mar-2009 22:45:43 - Last edited on 02-Mar-2009 22:46:33 by Seph

Serene End
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To answer your question Ark. Here are hints of the storyline. It has to do with a demonic god that was extremely powerful, the White Knight and Black Knight battle, and a corrupt madman using the power of this demonic god to attempt to rule the world. Though the plot may change, I've just posted what the current plot is. And no, I don't know a release date.

Wigwam, will you be alright? You combusted O_o

Well, at any rate. Thanks again you two. ^_^

P.S: Ark, how many errors DID you notice? I hope it isn't as much as last time o.o

P.S.S: Impossible! Nothing can go beyond Mountain Dew!!!
The end
is only
the beginning...

03-Mar-2009 02:00:42 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2016 23:49:44 by Serene End

Seph
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Seph

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Should we go ahead and prepare part 3 bios?

Cause Mine's almost ready, and I believe it plots to burn down my brain!

I must let it out! Hurry!

~w|gWaM126
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

04-Mar-2009 23:07:07

Serene End
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I suppose you can call the next story a spin-off of The World in Flames*****;_>

Speaking of which, I've got a preview ready to be posted, it'll example the storyline. ;)

P.S: Yes, you may post your bio. Just make sure to post it again on the story's thread when it is released.
The end
is only
the beginning...

04-Mar-2009 23:36:19 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2016 23:49:48 by Serene End

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\\[ Preview ]//
Before the God Wars, a demonic god, bearing the name "The Lord of Shadows" Malvolio had rose in the Realms of the Dead. He wanted to extend his rule into the Living Realm. His power was felt the north of Varrock which had turned grass land into a plain of death and destruction which is what the people of the world now call "The Wilderness". Many warriors would try their best to slay him but however they would lose their lives unable to defeat the great demonic power.
However, six warriors would rise to glory; the six legendary brothers. Dharok, Ahrim, Verac, Torag, Guthan, and Karil. They fought this demonic god and won the battle but they were placed under a curse because of this; to live in eternal suffering. Zamorak would soon claim the Wilderness for his own rule where his ambitions of power would grow. Many years after the beginning the God Wars, a great and powerful threat was brought back into the world, the Unbalanced god Alrous.
He took possession of the Rebel Army of Lumbridge's leader, the forgotten prince of the lost city Wekadelf Dante Bellerophon. But two years later, the full-god Spero would fight the fully reborn Alrous during the great Divine Dusk; the night legend believes that was the night that Gielinor was created by the Elder Gods. Dante Bellerophon returned from the verge of death and defeated Alrous with one final attack. He saved the world. This event would lead to the end of the God Wars.
(Continued on the next page :o)
The end
is only
the beginning...

04-Mar-2009 23:47:47 - Last edited on 05-Mar-2009 13:34:02 by Serene End

Ark Von Doom

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Excellent, I've already prepared one of the strangest characters you will ever see :P
Name: Heinreich Kvetch (Called Kvetch)
Gender: Male
Race: Neifvhern
Age: 346 (looks like he's in his 20s)
Born in: Somewhere in Elven Lands
Family: He has a foster father who is he fond of, and 4 foster sisters who he despises. His foster mother died of natural causes but he hated her when she was alive.
Appearance: Very thin and tall, he has blue eyes and blonde hair which is relatively long, and relatively unkempt. His distinguishing features are his pointed ears (like an elves), his nose which is little more than serpent-like slits, and his mouth, which is so incredibly wide that it goes all the way back to the back of his neck, making him look just a tad bit like an elven pacman with sharp teeth :P He has no lips and a wide grinning mouth with razor sharp teeth that are about three inches long. He wears what looks like a green British officers uniform.
Personality: Relatively insane, he giggles and laughs all of the time and nothing seems to upset him in the slightest. his laugh is "Kekekeke"
Weapon(s): He has shortswords that are hidden in his sleeves and shoes that he can let out and that he can use without using his actual hands. Also he can bite people's heads off, literally and in general use his super-strong teeth for combat (they are strong enough to break swords and he is able to eat any metal safely , though he doesn't like to of course)
Abilities: He can regenerate lost limbs, heal from any wound nearly instantly, is double jointed, a contortionist (able to fit his body into the tiniest of boxes), and extremely strong and agile physically. He can also eat through almost anything including biting heads off of people.

04-Mar-2009 23:52:34 - Last edited on 05-Mar-2009 02:17:00 by Ark Von Doom

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