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Seph
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Seph

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Am I the only person who read this story anymore?

What happened to the annoying-but-somewhat-funny Ark?

.What about Fik?

..Spain?

...Lupon?!?!


....Anyone?!?!


~w|gWaM126
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

25-Feb-2009 17:02:06

Serene End
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Serene End

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Ark is probably busy doing something (like typing, or correcting random people...or something) Fik is probably busy with cabbages and I DON'T know where the others went. Probably went to a Mountain Dew fountain or something*****;_>

P.S: Probably expect the Final Chapter to make it's debut around the end of the week or maybe around next week.

I don't know, O_o
The end
is only
the beginning...

25-Feb-2009 19:25:46 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2016 23:49:32 by Serene End

Ark Von Doom

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You underestimate the power of Arkadium Von Doomian Wazerheath XIII! (brings out a giant robot) Cacophony, destroy this Calphite queen and bring me the chapter, I've some unfinished business to attend to (eerie eye gleam).
In all honesty I've been getting home really late and haven't had time to do much, the QEP is keeping me busy while online and drama is offline, not to mention the fact that my friend and I are writing a book and it's my responsibility to make everyhting hilarious :p Regardless, without furher ado I give you edits:
"a large circle stained glass window of the ceiling" should be on isntead of of
"He throws his Rune 2h Sword away and just stood in place" throws should be threw
"And I felt threaten by you" threaten should be threatened
"The darker Dante eyes fully close and he stops breathing" Dante needs an 's
"He looks over to the left and sees Spero was on the ground and Alrous kept stomping on him." the past and present tenses are mixed up, change looks to looked and sees to saw that
Not too many really :p
Also don't quote me on this but I think Kalphite is spelled with a K.
Raphael Quotes:
Ark: Wigwam! Meet my annoying but funny super-death-robot Cacophony!
Cacophony:...
Ark: Oh that's right he doesn't talk... I'll just fix that!
Cacophony: HELLO MASTER ARK. WOULD YOU LIKE A CUPCAKE?
Ark: Your an incredibly desturctive robot of death! You don't ask if people want cupcakes! And yes.
Cacophony: YOUR DEATH IS IMA...IMI...IMANORT?
Ark: Imminent. Now I remeber why I didn't give you a voicebox, you can't handle words over 7 letters. I'll just take that out...
Cacophony:...
Ark: There now go destroy them all.
Cacophony:... (The muffins are burning, I must hurry back)
Ark: Where are you going! Get back here!
We are experiencing some technical difficulties. Please stand by.
Ark: Is that... a cabbage!?
End of transmission.

25-Feb-2009 20:52:41 - Last edited on 25-Feb-2009 21:15:41 by Ark Von Doom

Seph
Jun Member 2008

Seph

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Now that that robot is out of the way, I WILL KILL YOU, ARK!!!

*Does a cool backflip and slashes Ark with a sword, which is made of cardboard*

Wigwam126:Haha, I have destroyed Ark with the power of cardboard! now to get cardboard armour!!!

~/*\~W!GW@M126~/*\~
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

26-Feb-2009 01:30:03 - Last edited on 26-Feb-2009 01:31:22 by Seph

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Fear the power of cardboard!? O.o

Writing a book, eh? Well, that sounds great Ark. Best of luck from beginning to end. :P Also, thanks again for the edits. :D
The end
is only
the beginning...

26-Feb-2009 01:51:37 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2016 23:49:37 by Serene End

Serene End
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Serene End

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That's understandable, welcome back Fik. :)

EDIT: Please do not post for I wish to start the Final Chapter on a brand new page; which is almost done so expect it to be up around tomorrow morning. Do expect it to be quite long.

Many thanks for your patience,
The end
is only
the beginning...

27-Feb-2009 03:28:42 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2016 23:49:40 by Serene End

Seph
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Seph

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Well, it looks like the Original cast n' crew is back!

Now.....

To destroy you all with the power of Cardboard, 100% recycled!!!

In fact, I have made a Cardboard fortress, it is as large as A castle and as strong as-

* Water wave crashes into fortress, destroying it, cause water pretty much pwns cardboard, but you already knew that I bet...Wait, is this thing still on?!? *

~w|gWaM126
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

27-Feb-2009 22:41:10 - Last edited on 27-Feb-2009 22:41:48 by Seph

Seph
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Seph

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Hey, has anyone here ever met an evil tree?

I did once, but it tried to steal my Mountain Dew, so I burned it...

~w|gWaM126
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

01-Mar-2009 18:35:27

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