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"I do remember it. But I can't kill another helpless soul knowing that their end will be painful and dark."
"You feel sorry for these worthless maggots!? You who has shown damnation to more than three thousand people!? Ha, I never thought this would happen!"
"It doesn't matter about what happened in the past. I'm going to live the rest of my life to fix those mistakes."
"Hahahahahahahahaha!!"
"What the hell is so funny!?"
"I'll tell you what's so funny. The fact that you think you can 'fix' your mistakes. You're an idiot to think you can Ravinius."
"There's one way to fix my errors. By helping to end this war, I'm going to kill you."
Iban and Ravinus begin to hear a voice, it was Zamorak's voice. "We have been invited to the Army of the Altais' castle by Alrous himself. Abandon the camp and return to the castle immediately. I've come up with a plan that may finish this war with us being the winners."
Iban smirks. "Very well, my lord." he replied as he and the three demons teleport away. Ravinius sighs as he puts his arrow back into his quiver. Mark walks over to Ravinius with an confused look on his face.
"What happened?" Mark asked.
"It seems Alrous has come up with another plan. He's invited the Zamorakian army to his castle." Ravinius answered. The two enter the raiding camp's grounds. Mercutio sees Ravinius and glares at him. "Listen Mercutio. I'm not here to kill you or hurt you. I'm here to rescue you." Ravinius said. The Rebel Army of Lumbridge climbs down the hill and walks into the camp ground. Ravinius grabs his Dragon Dagger to begin cutting the ropes that bind Mercutio. At Zamorak's castle, a army of 100 arrive in Zamorak's throne room. Zamorak stands up from his throne chair with his arms crossed and his chest puffed out.
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20-Jan-2009 15:12:49

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"The Unbalance God, Alrous has invited us to his castle up in the far north. We will teleport there," Zamorak looks over at Iban. "Prince Iban, will you teleport us?" Iban points his staff up and everyone is teleported but Zamorak and himself.

"Where is General Ravinius?" Zamorak asked

"I was about to tell you father. He...has also...betrayed us..."

Zamorak punches the wall with a lot of strength. "DAMMIT!!"

"I apologize my lord."

"*sigh* Let's just get to Alrous' castle so I may start my plan."

"Very well." Iban teleports Zamorak and himself to Alrous' castle.

The End of Chapter 15
Next Chapter,
Chapter 16: Dealing of the Truly Evil

Thank you again for reading, I appreciate it ^_^ .
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20-Jan-2009 15:16:33 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2016 23:42:33 by Serene End

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Yep, yet again my typing mood has grabbed my hands to make them continue to type. This chapter isn't long (I think O.O)
Chapter 16: Dealing of the Truly Evil
Zamorak sees Alrous' castle for the first time. It was as long as about 10 Agility Pyramids and as big as five of those pyramids with a ten story tower in the middle of the castle. By the entrance, about 6 Cursed Magic Trees aligned vertically on both sides with two statues of demons by the entrance way. The material used to create this castle was magic stone. They all enter the castle, there were banners and kiteshields with Alrous' symbol on it (A line pointing horizontal, a curved line going through the other line from the upper right corner to the lower right corner, and a dot at lower right between the two lines) and torches were all hanging on the walls. They continue to walk through a hallway. The army arrives into a huge room with four doors on the left and right sides of the room. A Marble spiral staircase was in the middle of the room. Alrous stood there with his arms crossed with a red orange carpet under his feet. This carpet had black trimming on the edges.
"Welcome to my lovely castle." Alrous said
"It's a very..big castle." Zamorak replied.
"Yes well. It took about 10 minutes of my time to build. Oh well, follow me to my throne room. We have much to discuss."
They walk to the north. Alrous opens a large gilded door revealing a marble staircase with opulent rugs covering the stairs. The group started walking up the stairs. They pass more banners, kiteshields, black armour with Alrous' symbol in the middle, torches, and chandelier hanging on the ceiling. After climbing 100 stairs, they arrived at the door to the throne room. The door was about 50 feet tall and it had gilded edging.
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20-Jan-2009 17:09:21 - Last edited on 21-Jan-2009 23:51:30 by Serene End

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On the wall, there were banners. Beside the door was a row of about 3 sets of black armour with Alrous' symbol on them on each side of the door. Alrous puts his left hand on the door. The door briefly glowed the color orange. The door opened up, the group walked into the throne room. There were banners, kiteshields, swords, and candles on the walls. Against the walls were a bunch of statues of demons and sets of black armour. Alrous climbs seven stairs to get over to his Crystal throne and sits down on it. He puts his right elbow on the handle of his chair, clenches his right hand, and puts his fist against his right cheek. The Zamorakians stood in the middle of the room.
"So, Zamorakians. I've been thinking a bit lately. I've invited you here for you to enjoy yourselves before the Divine Dusk of course." Alrous said.
"I would like to ask you something Alrous." Zamorak said.
"Hmm? What is it?"
"Since we seem to be the strongest gods in this war. I would like to propose an ally treaty."
"So..you wish to become allies with me? Why Zamorak? Too afraid I might crush you after the Divine Dusk?"
"You want a world where everything is unbalanced and people suffer right? Well, I want a world where I rule all and people suffer. Our goals are somewhat the same."
"So, you're saying you want the suffering of all as well?"
"Yes."
"Hmm..seems fair enough." Alrous shrugs. "Why not? Fine, I accept the deal."
"Very good. We are now allies."
"But, let me tell you this. If I find one piece of evidence that you are going to back-stab me, I will make sure that you will be the first to suffer after my rebirth."
"That seems fair enough." Iban walks beside Zamorak. He looks up at Alrous.
"Alrous, what do you plan to do about the Rebel Army of Lumbridge?" Iban asked
"The Rebel Army of Lumbridge isn't anything I'm worried about. However, my only worry is Spero Forseti."
"Spero Forseti? You mean that Half-God?"
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20-Jan-2009 17:16:59

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"Yes. He has very powerful abilities that can possibly lead to my defeat."
"So, what do we do with the rebel scum?" Alfred asked.
"We taunt them."
"Taunt?"
"No matter how strong the warrior. Without mental strength, the warrior is helpless and hopeless."
"I see, mental warfare."
Meanwhile, after two hours. The Rebel Army of Lumbridge returns to their Lumbridge castle. Everyone entered the castle. Four hours later, the daylight had disappeared, everyone was in the main room talking to each other. Stephanie walks over to Mercutio who was outside looking at the sky. He looks over at her and notices something was much different about her. He sees her yellow eyes and pale white skin.
"What happened to you? Your skin is pale white, your eyes are yellow." Mercutio asked.
"The question is, what happened to you? You've been acting strange ever since we got back. What's the matter?" Stephanie replied.
"Nothing. I'm just clearing my head is all."
"Mmhm. I'll just go with that."
"You don't believe me?"
"To be honest, no."
"..."
"Look, ever since you've been gone, I've changed."
"I see that. You're a vermin of Zamorak now."
"Oh, just because I was forced to become a vampire. You're going to start addressing me as 'vermin'?!"
"Tell me the story."
"Long story short, I was traveling with Cameron to find the Ebony Key and I got shot by an arrow that had a extremely deadly type of Kalphite poison. The type that cannot be stopped if it's within a body of a human. So, the only way I could live through it was if I was bitten by a vampire which turned me into a vampire."
"Hmm..I see. I apologize for calling you a vermin."
"What is the matter with you? You're acting strange."
"Nothing."
"I can tell your lying."
"I'm fine."
"If you insist on lying. I'll just leave but I know something is wrong with you. I can tell by the way you're acting." With that, Stephanie pulls the handle on the door and walks into the castle with the door closed behind her.
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20-Jan-2009 17:24:38 - Last edited on 21-Jan-2009 13:01:54 by Serene End

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Back at Alrous' castle. All the soldiers left the castle but Iban and Zamorak. They stood in-front of Alrous.

"Well, I hope we can keep this treaty for a very long time." Zamorak said.

"Yes. Well, thank you for inviting us to your castle. We will see you soon." Iban replied. With that, Iban and Zamorak turned around, opened the throne room door, and left the room with a smile of pleasure on their faces. Alrous sat on his chair with a great big smile on his face too.

"Heh..heh...heh..hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!" Alrous laughed hysterically with his laugh echoing throughout the throne room.

The End of Chapter 16
Next Chapter,
Chapter 17: Doubtful

Thank you again for reading, I appreciate it ^_^ .
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20-Jan-2009 17:28:48 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2016 23:42:37 by Serene End

Ark Von Doom

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Witness the incredible power of highspeed super-nutritious edits:
(though irl this is impossible to do ). ???
"Iban asked with three demons" should be the not with.
"Cursed Magic Trees alined" should be aligned
"Zamorak and the rest of the army sees" should be see
"two statues a demon" should be two statues of demons
"if you insist on lying. I'll just leave but I know something is wrong with you." capitalize it, remove the period.
Raphael quotes:
Faust: I'm fiiiinished!
Raphael: What?
Faust: Prisoner 489 of block A has been successfully converted into a Corrupted Angel. It's so beautiful... it brings a tear to my eye.
Raphael: Such a horrifying creature it shall be on the battlefiled... Faust you have truly outdone yourself.
Faust: The wings are made of an adamant-titanium alloy that allows for both speed and endurance; the voltage travels along these wires within the wings, and these tubes here constantly pump my regenerative potion into them. They'll be nearly indestructible, their sense of smell is 20 times that of a foxhound, and they should easily be able to lift a small dragon with either hand. Vexxazrin, your symbiote goes here to allow maximum response time to the brain.
Raphael: Why does it have a black bag over it's head?
Faust: I thought it looked evil.
Vexxazrin: With this last step our preparations are complete. We are now ready to realize my ultimate goal. Using the Scythe of Truth we will ABSORB THE ENERGY OF THE GODS THEMESLVES! MWAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!
Raphael: Mwahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!
Faust: Mwahahahahahahahhaha... haha... heehee... hoo.
Raphael: Can we stop now?
Vexxazrin: Yes.
Faust: My throat hurts...

20-Jan-2009 23:07:42

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Thanks Ark, I appreciate it :D

Man, I could have avoided one of those errors if I had a brain in my head >****;

P.S: The whole "though irl this is impossible to do". I'm just saying that it's impossible to grab an arrow coming at you once it's shot. But I'm sure you probably know that '*rl' is internet language for 'In real life'. I was just trying to save characters with the internet language (though I hate using it -.-).

P.S.S: Is 'sees' even a word? It didn't get underlined by my spellchecker so I guess it is a word. Okay, now I'm sounding like an idiot. I'm not saying I'm against your correction but I didn't change. I think sees sounds better. Then again, saw probably is good >****;
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21-Jan-2009 13:17:02 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2016 23:42:44 by Serene End

Kitties Rule

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to be or not to be!
that is the question!
hey were you watching me ice giant?!?
pulls out dragon halberd and does special
two days later (on stage)
to be or not to be!
that is the question!
were you watching me people who are meant to be watching me cos im the lead role in a play?!?
diiiieeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

21-Jan-2009 19:23:50

Seph
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Seph

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Good Chapter.

Im bored....I think i'll go on a non-member server and see if anyone can realise i'm a member...

~w|gWaM126
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

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