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Eri Vi
Jun Member 2010

Eri Vi

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I read it, and it's really good – not at all what you made it out to be on TIGA.
Nice description of how he's feeling and the thought processes he goes through.
If there was anything missing it would be physical description, because while most of us know 'the Wise Old Man' of whom you speak, most non-RS people wouldn't have a clue. Physical description is also a really good way to show the situation that he's in. Of course, that's just how I'd do it, as it's my strongest point in writing.
I would also be interested to read something of yours with an original storyline.

09-Oct-2010 06:22:01 - Last edited on 10-Oct-2010 07:36:34 by Eri Vi

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