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aBugfromMars

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Ninjas...?

05-Dec-2009 22:43:53

Joebobjoe6

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I agree Vikings are MUCH better than Ninjas, OR Pirats!
I am working on the grammar still, But I got impatient and did more chapters, =P Im going to add them, BUT I KNOW I NEED TO WORK ON GRAMMAR. Thank You Yanklet For your historical advice, Ill fix that. I did my research, but after I wrote it, Ive been meaning to fix that =)
EDIT: The historical errors have been Fixed =) Thanks!
New chapters added, but the grammar is still well... not great =P thanks all!

08-Dec-2009 03:33:30 - Last edited on 08-Dec-2009 03:47:44 by Joebobjoe6

Joebobjoe6

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Chapter 12 is about half way done, its a long chapter lol.
EDIT: Chapter 12 is up now.

08-Dec-2009 03:51:29 - Last edited on 18-Dec-2009 07:31:11 by Joebobjoe6

Joebobjoe6

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Aww Man my Fourm Suggestion Thread got eated by the page 51 monster =( o well

08-Dec-2009 03:58:21

Joebobjoe6

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Well Ive Been Busy Lately, But Im Back And Working Now.
wow I just noticed I capped every world lol.

12-Dec-2009 01:07:44

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Downshift

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This is a fantastic story. One of the best I have read in a while, but there are ways to make it better.
The Return Of Zaros- Godwars2
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would look better as
The Return of Zaros
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Also the word Majarat is correctly spelled Mahjarrat

12-Dec-2009 03:45:46