I have Written another, and much shorter story. It's called 'Above Gielinor - The First Space Launch' I'm really quite proud of it, and its easy to read, the whole thing is only a page long, check it out!
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Joebobjoe6
great story dude, and there are some spelling and grammar errors that need fixing, i loved reading it and it kept me guessing the whole time, very original.