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Planning


“Gentlemen! We are faced with a crisis! The great plan is threatened by a man who would seek to stop the invasion! And this time, this one, he knows about it. In fact, it is because of him it’s happening, even if he doesn’t know it. We must kill him, before he can rally the troops and inform them of the danger they are in!”

Aris stood at the head of a huge table. Sitting at seats along it were huge men, muscular and strong. Each one had spiraling tattoos and a criss-crossing network of scars, but very few, Aris knew, had any damage done to their backs. In the streets of Varrock, you couldn’t run, and if an enemy got behind you and had a chance to strike, it would be a killing blow. Gang members had little honour, and backstabbing was nothing to them.

They murmured in agreement. They were all for the plan, and reveled in its simplicity. It really was brilliant, but easy enough for anyone to understand and think up.

“The man in question is Jarvel. He is a T’sunrai, a Knight of the Burning Star, and is not to be underestimated.”

The gang members had heard of these knights – Many of them became Doom Bringers, and they were the ones they truly feared. There was a certain amount of respect for the Knight being displayed, and Aris moved to crush it.

“He would have us all killed, gentlemen. Remember that! I vote that we send an entire force of Darkblade Assassins to remove him and destroy the threat!”

The men balked at the mention of the Darkblades. They were a ruthless cult of Zaros worshippers, who were half man, half something else. They had tails of coiling energy, and their skin was made from the same chaotic material as Abyssal Whips, favoured weapon of the Blooded Ones. They were a force to be reckoned with, and were only loosely bound to the will of the Gypsy. However, as well as instilling due fear, this also encouraged the huge men of the council.

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Many hurriedly agreed to the proposal, and other followed suit. Aris watched sanguinely as each and every one of the council members voted to summon the Darkblades to dispose of the warrior. She has always known that once more than half voted her way, the rest would follow, because of the influence of the others and Aris’s power.

“It is decided then. Send a runner. Tell the Darkblades what they must do.”

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Jetttboy95

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Is goood!!!!!

Nice story btw..

But yeah, everything seem to be good, except is daemon spelled demon?

Probably not, i AM american so I might just be wrong about that..


Welp, nice story you gots here.

18-Aug-2007 21:16:33 - Last edited on 18-Aug-2007 21:16:50 by Jetttboy95

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Daemon is the correct spelling. Demon is something used by people who can't/are too lazy to spell it.

However, to avoid contradicting myself, I will point out that my name has a history behind it, and that's why its spelled this way.

18-Aug-2007 21:22:06

Evil King J

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Wow demon, not only do you have a great sense of humor but the films you watch (and narrate :P ) seems to have effected your style of writing and your skills of being an author.

Wow demon you leave me without a word, what a *shafeety story, I am yet to read more but so far this is *fondus.



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Sometimes I cannot find descriptive words to decribe such Brilliant/Horrid things which is why I make them up!


*shafeety: Beyond amazing.

*fondus: beyond excellent.

18-Aug-2007 21:25:50 - Last edited on 18-Aug-2007 21:37:07 by Evil King J

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$$$$ Quiz is Currently NOT POSSIBLE. Parts are missing at the moment. $$$$



Here's a story quiz:

Considering the length of my story thus far, this will likely be too easy.

1) What is the name of the Lord of the Changing Ways?

2) What is the name of the Squire who accompanies Jarvel?

3) What is the name of the Chaplain?

4) What relation did the Chaplain and Jarvel have/still do have?

5) How many members are there in Squad Alpha?

6) What building have the people of Varrock congregated in?

7) Where do Squad Alpha make a stand against the daemons?

8) Who is the Dead Lord, who desires to bring destruction on Varrock?

9) What relation are the two men first found in Zaff's staffs?

10) How does Jarvel get to the Lord of the Changing Ways' realm?

On a scale of 1-10, the difficulty goes as follows:

1: 7
2: 5
3: 2
4: 6
5: 8
6: 4
7: 4
8: 6
9: 6
10: 6

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