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wzzl1
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wzzl1

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Ah.. Good ending, I've finished the story. Although the writing is slightly less good than the rest of your stories it was quite good. Atleast you get a 10 for orginality. I don't recall reading a story where the gods are dead at the beginning - and, most notably, where a god actualy DIES and is replaced!
Bad points of the story are that the character development is a bit rough and abrupt sometimes. People swich believes too fast I think.. Maybe, if you'd ever rewrite it, you could add more psychologic development ar whatever. One thing that particulary hit me is that Nessa converted to Saradomism... It was like a 180 degrees turn.

Anyway good overall.

09-May-2007 20:12:43 - Last edited on 09-May-2007 20:13:32 by wzzl1

Crystal Smee

Crystal Smee

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Thanks. Yeah, I'm not proud of this. Characters are normally my strong point (I think), and this is horrible there...I've grown a lot since I began writing this. ;)
I've considered rewriting, but I have so many new ideas I want to write, I don't know when I'll have the chance. :P

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