Damn... I started to read this on the bus, and hurried home ASAP to keep reading the rest of it!
It's a great story, and you carry out a wonderful message!
If I were to write something like this in English class, that would definitively give me an A!
Keep on writing things like this and I bet that you will be a great author one day!
Heya. Thanks for the read and sorry for the late reply.
If I had written this for my English class, I definitely would not get an A!
Again, many thanks. Your words have warmed an otherwise cold and long forgotten story.