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29-Aug-2011 14:33:11
just finished rereading. I was surprised it was 36 posts, I could have sworn it was at least 80. Funny. The story still feels much longer.
Well, I did notice a few extra things here and there. I was a bit surprised about the ending, I was 100% it was Alex who said the last statement, but now I found out it was David. Good thing I reread this story haha.
Hmm, as for suggestions, I would have made Alex a girl, and that probably would have saved a few comments regarding the bible.
Actually, no; similarily to my suggestion on Brotherly Love, I would have included a girl like Alex, and maybe even go as far as depicting the two meeting each other a few times in their real lives as well as in-game though neither knowing the other in person very well.
In this way, we'd have two characters of the opposite gendre who had the same life on RuneScape, and thus the story ends with (maybe) two embittered characters.
But then again I don't think that would have added much effect other than including another character in the story. But then again, as mentioned earlier, it could have hindered anyone's comments about 'reading the bible and seeing a doctor.'
Other than that, I don't have much to say because there's nothing wrong with the story. Didnt quite get the same effect as I did when I first read the story though. Now I wish I could read it the first time again.
Lastly, the question I noticed a few times in the story was 'Why bother?'
My answer, 'Why not?'
Awsome.
Well, I did notice a few extra things here and there. I was a bit surprised about the ending, I was 100% it was Alex who said the last statement, but now I found out it was David. Good thing I reread this story haha.
Hmm, as for suggestions, I would have made Alex a girl, and that probably would have saved a few comments regarding the bible.
Actually, no; similarily to my suggestion on Brotherly Love, I would have included a girl like Alex, and maybe even go as far as depicting the two meeting each other a few times in their real lives as well as in-game though neither knowing the other in person very well.
In this way, we'd have two characters of the opposite gendre who had the same life on RuneScape, and thus the story ends with (maybe) two embittered characters.
But then again I don't think that would have added much effect other than including another character in the story. But then again, as mentioned earlier, it could have hindered anyone's comments about 'reading the bible and seeing a doctor.'
Other than that, I don't have much to say because there's nothing wrong with the story. Didnt quite get the same effect as I did when I first read the story though. Now I wish I could read it the first time again.
Lastly, the question I noticed a few times in the story was 'Why bother?'
My answer, 'Why not?'
Awsome.
30-Aug-2011 06:10:27 - Last edited on 31-Aug-2011 00:18:36 by Azigarath
Hmm, as for suggestions, I would have made Alex a girl, and that probably would have saved a few comments regarding the bible.
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Actually, if I were at all concerned about those comments, I'd have changed that by now
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Ruben: I pre-ordered the Collector's Edition ^^
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Actually, if I were at all concerned about those comments, I'd have changed that by now
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Ruben: I pre-ordered the Collector's Edition ^^
30-Aug-2011 20:21:15
What?!
That's crazy! It costs like 120$!!! But it's worth it...
Man...
That's crazy! It costs like 120$!!! But it's worth it...
Man...
31-Aug-2011 14:38:57
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