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AWESOME WORK
n i was just wondering.. how on the first page u said NovelistElly isnt with us nymore..... he quit or wat?
(just wondering
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n i was just wondering.. how on the first page u said NovelistElly isnt with us nymore..... he quit or wat?
(just wondering
)
28-Mar-2010 19:20:24
Yes, he quit, I'm afraid.
Also, huge apologies to you guys, I found out I missed out 2 paragraphs when copy and pasting this story!
Edit: Okay guys, completely fixed the errors, and took out the asterisks, again
The 2 paragraphs were this:
At first I thought he was returning to his silent self again, or deciding that I was annoying him, when I said his skill levels were higher than my idol and friend, David’s. I gave him David’s player name for reference, in case he wouldn’t believe me. But when I finished my compliment he ceased his relentless performance of alchemy, and raised his head, making eye contact finally. From a distance his eyes seemed to glow. As soon as I showed incomprehension he looked upon me once more, the spark in his eyes vanished, and he became rigid and full of horror. His eyes widened and as if the devil were eating him alive.
After a few questions about my life, and how I met David, which I perceived as simple curiosity, he dropped the subject. He was interested in how David settled in college, and was delighted to know that David was alive and well, and happy, more than anything else. Soon I was overcome with fatigue and I had to log off. We said goodbye to each other, and he thanked me for coming, apologised that there were nothing left for me today. He told me later, in a few weeks’ time, that I was the only person he added permanently to his friends list that year.
Sorry again!
This precedes 'From that day onwards...'
Also, huge apologies to you guys, I found out I missed out 2 paragraphs when copy and pasting this story!
Edit: Okay guys, completely fixed the errors, and took out the asterisks, again
The 2 paragraphs were this:
At first I thought he was returning to his silent self again, or deciding that I was annoying him, when I said his skill levels were higher than my idol and friend, David’s. I gave him David’s player name for reference, in case he wouldn’t believe me. But when I finished my compliment he ceased his relentless performance of alchemy, and raised his head, making eye contact finally. From a distance his eyes seemed to glow. As soon as I showed incomprehension he looked upon me once more, the spark in his eyes vanished, and he became rigid and full of horror. His eyes widened and as if the devil were eating him alive.
After a few questions about my life, and how I met David, which I perceived as simple curiosity, he dropped the subject. He was interested in how David settled in college, and was delighted to know that David was alive and well, and happy, more than anything else. Soon I was overcome with fatigue and I had to log off. We said goodbye to each other, and he thanked me for coming, apologised that there were nothing left for me today. He told me later, in a few weeks’ time, that I was the only person he added permanently to his friends list that year.
Sorry again!
This precedes 'From that day onwards...'
28-Mar-2010 19:25:49 - Last edited on 28-Mar-2010 19:45:11 by Englishkid62
I'm terribly sorry, guys
And it *is* in the story now - it wasn't before.
And it *is* in the story now - it wasn't before.
28-Mar-2010 22:27:25
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