It took me longer then I had expected to actually write what I thought about your story. It truly brings out the sadness of both real life and Runescape. This story makes me mad quite honestly, not at you, but at Runescape and the people of the world. Truly well written. At first I was confused, not understanding what was happening, but when I had reached the end, I felt sad. Angry at David for what he had done, for his stupidness. And yet, it is all so true, the sad truth. How many times has such things gone unnoticed? And a lone person dies within himself/herself jest because of the stupidness of other. In some ways, I feel close to this story, as though we have all lived through a moment like that. Good job English, very good job.
01-May-2010 17:17:26