Okay. I dunno if you said something about it; I could've simply overlooked it. Long, fun day today. One of the first actually warm and sunny days of the year. Point is, sun to the head and one am don't add to particularly thorough reading or insightful responses. XP
Yeah, I've been "homeless" (staying at a friend's) for almost two weeks now. I'm hanging out with the friend almost constantly which leaves little to no time for writing or much else.
um, I'm a bit confused. I haven't read anything of the story (read everything else) for that reason. Is this a sequel, or are you writing the same story? If it's a sequel, where's the first?